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Rapture within a dancing firestorm
by Denise Edwards → (All Poetry by Denise Edwards)
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This is a romantic fantasy


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The love Goddess Venus has touched me
With fiery fingers to awaken my desires
At the same moment the love Prince Cupid
Has pierced your heart with the arrow
Of deep passionate urges to have me
(*) (*) (*) (*)
And here I lay, distanced by space, my
Waves of desire ignite the rippling waters
Aching to fulfill these spiraling needs
Of pulsing purple passions and burning fires,
Echoed with soft whispers of deep urges
And spiced with torrid visions of sensuality
(*) (*) (*) (*)
Our need to joinhas found a way for us to
Cum together and realize the joy that awaits
Once you arrive, we’ll begin with soft waves
Of gentle passion and soft tender fires
That our rapture will explode into
A tidal wave and a dancing firestorm
That will rock the earth’s foundation!


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 Reviews of "Rapture within a dancing firestorm"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 28, 2009
I will simply echo Michelle's words because I think she's very nicely evaluated what you have shared here. Thank you, Denise. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed on March 16, 2009
Passionate, erotic, a firestorm indeed! Excellent use of desciptive wording without making this pleasurable piece bawdy extreme! Bravo!

Nicole

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on March 15, 2009
So passionate and mildly erotic too. Wow! There i snoting more to say, because you said it all in the poem. I rate this a 10 out of 10 and than you for sharing this very uplifting piece of rapture.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on March 15, 2009
This is one fantastic and romantic piece you have written.Reading this poem made my day.take care Denise.Its good reading your poems again

Edwin

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2009
Woohoooooooo....beautiful writing sweet lady..I love how you write..breath taking indeed...have a wonderful and safe evening...Hugssss

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on March 13, 2009
WOW!! You know what's really great about this...it isn't crap. Alot of times, passionate poems are written with a heavy hand dipped into the ink pot of extra adjectives- not so with yours, a delicate hand has sculpted this pleasurable, decadent poem.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 13, 2009
I can feel the vibrations from here, girl when it comes to passionate fire storms...you rock.

hugs
Fee


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