The love Goddess Venus has touched me
With fiery fingers to awaken my desires
At the same moment the love Prince Cupid
Has pierced your heart with the arrow
Of deep passionate urges to have me
(*) (*) (*) (*)
And here I lay, distanced by space, my
Waves of desire ignite the rippling waters
Aching to fulfill these spiraling needs
Of pulsing purple passions and burning fires,
Echoed with soft whispers of deep urges
And spiced with torrid visions of sensuality
(*) (*) (*) (*)
Our need to joinhas found a way for us to
Cum together and realize the joy that awaits
Once you arrive, we’ll begin with soft waves
Of gentle passion and soft tender fires
That our rapture will explode into
A tidal wave and a dancing firestorm
That will rock the earth’s foundation!
So passionate and mildly erotic too. Wow! There i snoting more to say, because you said it all in the poem. I rate this a 10 out of 10 and than you for sharing this very uplifting piece of rapture.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
WOW!! You know what's really great about this...it isn't crap. Alot of times, passionate poems are written with a heavy hand dipped into the ink pot of extra adjectives- not so with yours, a delicate hand has sculpted this pleasurable, decadent poem.
This is book 2 of my new fantasy trilogy, The Twins of Moon. As Quimbre warns Eefa, 'No world is more riddled with secrets than the eldritch waters we now blithely sail.' Here in the Sea of Stars the twins discover their extraordinary true destiny.
Regis
Nicole
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
Edwin
hugs
Fee