Let me fly to paradise And craft her A royal scarf Spectacular in color Lined with lavender diamonds And crown her The queen of my heartbeats
Let me fly to the clouds And triple spin her A candy fluff Sweeter than spun sugar That flirts with her tastebuds And stains her dreams With the drippings Of romantic sweetness
Let me fly to the home Of ancient mythology And strip Aphrodite of her title And rewrite history Declaring my ladylove As the real goddess Of love & beauty
Let me fly to heaven And bring back A pair of matrimonial wings And make her A wife to my heart And an angel to my soul
I agree with Crystal-Rain...Ronnie...we need more of you.
This is so beautiful it brought tears to my eyes. I can
taste the cotton candy! Ed Kostro is right...you should check
out selling these marvels to card companies. I know they are
very personal writings...but that is what women want to read
in a greeting card.
Oh...yes...you knew that.
Beautifully irresistable. All the guys I've ever met, thought romance belonged in the discarded chapter of a bad novel. Where did I go wrong? You're like finding a daisy in Alaska in the middle of winter. Wow!
This is an amazing poem...quite stunning!
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on December 7, 2003
Handsum,
OOOOH this is os beautiful....
"Let me fly to the clouds
And triple spin her
A candy fluff
Sweeter than spun sugar
That flirts with her tastebuds
And stains her dreams
With the drippings
Of romantic sweetness
Let me fly to the home
Of ancient mythology
And strip Aphrodite of her title
And rewrite history
Declaring my ladylove
As the real goddess
Of love & beauty"
A half-zythian bard gets caught up in an affair with the Duchess of Highlake. The Duke wants him dead and our hero is forced to flee through a forest that no one has ever returned from.
Swamp Alley is a portal between this side and the other side. The Wizard is destined to save the land from the Ugly Babies in the Land of Lack Luster on the other side. With the help of Madame Plume and her magic wand, can they save the magical doll
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This is so beautiful it brought tears to my eyes. I can
taste the cotton candy! Ed Kostro is right...you should check
out selling these marvels to card companies. I know they are
very personal writings...but that is what women want to read
in a greeting card.
Oh...yes...you knew that.
"Lavender diamonds"...I like that. Yes, yes.
Carmen
~Chrissie
OOOOH this is os beautiful....
"Let me fly to the clouds
And triple spin her
A candy fluff
Sweeter than spun sugar
That flirts with her tastebuds
And stains her dreams
With the drippings
Of romantic sweetness
Let me fly to the home
Of ancient mythology
And strip Aphrodite of her title
And rewrite history
Declaring my ladylove
As the real goddess
Of love & beauty"
Gorgeous moving piece.
Peg
Where did i put my wings??
You romantic you!!
Love Tinka
Thank you,
Tami
Great imagery of the heavens!
Thanks for reviews!
Susan Sparks