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I made my Dad cry...
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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I haven't a clue where this came from at 5:45AM...maybe a passing dream...e


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Sure children and parents have them, arguments,


Looking back now they made very little sense,


But at the time they must have been important,


Between my dad and me there was an enormous fence…


 


It happened I am sure for him quite a bit,


But I never saw him cry, I was not aware of it,


The first time I ever of it saw,


I was busted & he could do nothing to help, it made him ball…


 


His last seven years, I hope I acted a bit better,


I hope wherever he is he gets a chance to read this letter,


For if he could see what I herein wrote,


I would want him to know just how much,


Those same tears now get stuck in my throat…J


© ed ~ 01/11/07


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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 11, 2007
Awwwwww..come here let me hug you....this brought tears to my eyes to mate!!

I know he know that you loved him no matter what!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 11, 2007
A super write Ed
I am sure he has
Fathers are human too
Mine was a mooch, cried in all our weddings
All seven of them
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 11, 2007
I hope wherever he is he gets a chance to read this letter

So do I, my friend.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 11, 2007
In a way, I wonder if the arguments that occur between fathers and sons (mothers and daughters sometimes, too) aren't a bit like the ones that come into play in the animal kingdom? Once the hormones are raging, the competition exists between all the male animals no matter their relationship. It is a survival instinct and as boys progress into manhood, they come to realize that their first love, which was their mother, who no matter how much she loved you, chose your father over you as her partner. Perhaps we are more the beast than the spirit in these matters. In the end, the fight really was pointless and degraded the quality of the time we had to spend with our parents. Sadly, it is only with age that we gain wisdom and come to realize how we wasted so much precious time.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Reviewed on January 11, 2007
There is always hope. I had two people in my life I thought I would never have in my life again and last Thanksgiving they both sat at the dinner table with us. Good piece. Good luck.

Reviewed by Abe Rossi Jr
Reviewed on January 11, 2007
This is a strong and touching piece. Peace Abel

Reviewed on January 11, 2007
A strong paternal bond is never really broken. Take his tears and water the good memories you shared with them.
I only saw my Dad cry once, a cry of 'I merrit the wrang bloody wumin!' (I married the wrong woman). The stuck it out for nearly 50 years until he passed away.
As a father myself, I have cried in anguish over major health events affecting my wife and our daughter. My daughter never got busted but certainly tested our patience. She is now a stoical woman of 30 years of age and I am immenssely proud of her.

Is your Dad still alive?

Regards
Dai


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