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First time...
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But twelve years old,

My dad did of me scold,

Go home I was told,

Hitchhiked home quite bold…

 

She, about in her early thirties,

I thought she to be pretty darn old,

But she asked if I wanted to be grown up,

As far as I was concerned I was still a little pup…

 

My body was for the most part twelve,

But when she did of my "parts" delve,

She found I was much older there than in my mind,

Still she made me feel like a full grown man,

She was my first, of her I did love, I was of her a fan…

 

Together in her front seat we weren’t for long,

But it felt heavenly, she taught me alot,

For fifteen minutes I did surely “grow”,

On me her experience she did bestow,

And never even to this day did I think of her as a “hoe”…

© ed ~ 3/10/11


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 Reviews of "First time..."
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on April 22, 2011
Lucky stiff. Patrick

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 12, 2011
interesting expression of your "coming of age"

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 11, 2011
I thought she to be pretty darn old

I think you thought right, Bro - Ma claims she was a lot older than you know!

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 10, 2011
Coming of age, says Kate,
but i'll settle for coming;
good one, Ed!

John

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 10, 2011
... Blimey... your dad didn't take up your position in the front seat of that car, by any chance, did he?!!!! This is some coming of age, Ed! xx

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 10, 2011
I guess we all have that one first time that seems to remain in our memories...
fee

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2011
Oh my...think u said it all... yeah u sure did....Hugsss

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 10, 2011
There once was an experience for Ed
On the seat of a car not a bed
But is was just fine
Like a sweet summer wine
And Ed learned a lot it is said

With my compliments... ...love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2011
I'll not name names, but . . .

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 10, 2011
And I thought you were talking about driving! Men, were you lucky! I only discovered who I was at 13, and no woman or girl would have anything to do with me. I must admit that I was attracted to Mrs. Robinson more than once, but never consummated the deal.

Unfortunately, today they put women away for making us boys into men. It's a sad commentary on our righteous religious rulers. That is one area you Hugh Hefner has been unable to liberate. And I'm not talking about abuse of children.

One of your best writes.

Ron

Reviewed on April 10, 2011
ED ...

sometimes, 'Old' Cherries are Sweetest!

didn't 'lose' mine 'til 19 ... U DONE GUD! TK.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on April 10, 2011
She was something else Ed. You have away with words.

Newfie Hugs, Rose


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