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F William (Bill) Broome

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Private Audition
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Private Audition

Young musicians vied for prizes
She and her violin did not win

Dejection bleeds from her body
sitting rigid to regain composure

A smiling older man asks her to
accompany him to a large office

He had conducted the orchestra
accompanying every audition

He offers his condolences and
a long contract to join his band


F William Broome 2008



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 Reviews of "Private Audition"
Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on January 7, 2008
Good on her and good on you for your musical pen.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 7, 2008
Bravo, as a lover of violin concerts and anything with a solo virtuoso in it, it warms my heart that the opportunity is giving to those wanted to play the instrument without the press or expectation of a win.
Georg

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
I have long been a believer that in most things we make our own lucky...and rejection is not a reflection of our talent but of another's taste. Well cone, my friend...
M

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
:))))... You just never know.... Someone, somewhere is ALWAYS watching and admiring your efforts - from close by or a distance. True talent will never go unrewarded. I love the feeling you have poured into this write, William. We applaud with you! xx

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
How very enlightening for someone so young to offered an opportunity of a lifetime....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
Wow, an exciting write my friend...great ending!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
Wow! What a trick ending. Nicely done and completely unexpected. I enjoyed the terseness of your prose as well as the direct approach of your narrative. Well done!

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
Triumph! Beautiful work my friend......I love your positive twists and heartwarming lyrics.....

Peace,

Bill

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
Often times these little miracles occur especially in the arts and entertainment fields... an unknown actor passed over for a one line part is rememmbered by the producer in a movie that requires a larger part...fate or just the way peoplle are perceived at different times. Regardless a great write that brings out our sympathy and then our joy as the girl is rewarded.
Fee

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
ah--the silver lining!

Reviewed on January 5, 2008
She might not have won the audition, but she won the contest! Well done, beautifully penned inspiration, Bill.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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