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Love, Fate And Time
by Sara L Russell → (All Poetry by Sara L Russell)
  
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[Effects time may have on love...]


Poem Artwork

  Part One


  Narrator:  


  "Love and Fate went astray
  from the world into space
  to steal a night from Time and stay
  to gaze into one another’s face
  while all of Heaven’s back was turned
  and none were witness to the crime
  and so their wayward passion burned
  concealed from the jealous eyes of Time..."


  Part Two


  Love, to Fate: 


  "Come down to the honey sweet
  time runs low and I am incomplete
  take away the aimless quietude
  with music of sighs, the manna of Love’s food.'
  
  'Come down to the velvet flower
  whose petalled fissure shivers with Love’s power.
  Come down warm and wetly glittering,
  take this lonely flesh and make it sing."



  Part Three


  Fate, to Love: 


  "Love, my beautiful, divine
  come and press those lips to mine
  and I will kneel where you recline
  and I will drink your love like wine."


  "Garnet-scarlet is that rose
  so curved in elegant repose
  wickedly sullen, when morose
  kiss-shaped lips so warm and close."


  "I stayed for longer than was wise
  to kiss the lashes of your eyes
  your smile gave me butterflies.
  Hearts may flutter, while Time flies."
  
  "Love, my beautiful and dear
  I melt whenever you are near
  and Love, when you disappear
  you leave me burning like a tear."



  Part Four


  Time:


  "I cannot
  be put into reverse
  I drink down the blood of the universe
  woe to Love
  woe unto beauty’s bloom
  mine is the hand that closes up the tomb."


  "I bring
  a season’s changes to the land
  bring heaven’s vengeance down upon the damned
  for under sentient flesh lies silent bone:
  the fate of wicked souls lies carved in stone."


  "Look to your soul
  the mirror of your deeds
  borrow levity while duty bleeds
  there’s no commodity to steal or lend
  that will not find your debts out in the end."


  "Woe to Love!
  Woe to the hand of Fate!
  I am the unforeseen you saw too late
  I turn the axis of the changing sky
  While 'If Only' begs the question "Why"..."


  "Woe to you
  who puts off one more day:
  I will steal your final chance away.
  I steer the winds - and in your mortal breath
  already lies the blueprint of your death."


   


  Part Five


  Narrator:


  "Love turned from fate with a sigh
  stifling a weary yawn
  as, unnoticed, Time crept by
  and in the harsher light of dawn
  Fate and Love beheld themselves
  reflected in each other’s eyes
  once loved over and above all else
  - now finding fault, now truth from lies."


  "In sweaters and sad pyjamas, lie
  Man and Woman, Love and Fate
  and on their lips all sweet words die
  in their grim master bed of hate
  and Man shall grimly mow the lawn
  and Woman, grimly wash the floor
  and Time has turned their love to scorn
  For them, as for so many more."
         
  THE END.


 


 


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 Reviews of "Love, Fate And Time"
Reviewed by Sara Russell
Reviewed on November 18, 2003
Hi Jim... I agree that the last stanza is depressing and more than a touch cynical too. My own marriage is happy, but some people I've known have had sad love lives, and the ending is about them. This poem was published in my first e-book, Pinky's Little Book of Shadows, as an HTML page and a video clip (the stanzas spoken by Time). For that clip, there was an armillery sphere (a bit like the one in the pic above) in the foreground, to give a bit of a staged feel.

I could re-write the last stanza to smooth out some of the harsher-sounding words, one day. It might also be fun to make a video with a speaker for each character, including the Narrator (poet friends with web cams take note - if it was done with AVIs I could splice them together). One thing I can't do is make the ending happy... because part of the point of the poem is that Time changes all things, including love, sometimes. The characters Love and Fate start off happy. So a major change is to make them sad. But hey Jim... it's only a story, after all. If I re-draft the last stanza, I'll let you know... All the best,

Sara.

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on November 17, 2003
This is rather depressing, Sara. The beginning is fabulous, the middle too, but I am not happy with the end. It is far too much of a downer. Most of this is very subtle and very well done. The final stanza whacks you on the head -- and it is not as smoothly written as the rest either. (Just my take on this, of course.)

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on November 3, 2003
Wow!
How can mere words describe the beauty
With which your quill has spoken?
Your thoughts they cast such magical spells
Which shall remain unbroken.

Sara... you have an awesome talent! I shall read more of you, as time permits.

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Sara, with THIS your talent and creativity shined searingly bright:
"I cannot
be put into reverse
I drink down the blood of the universe
woe to Love
woe unto beauty’s bloom
mine is the hand that closes up the tomb."

All the verses and all the metaphors and scenes painted within this poem are so profoundly real...! Intense, beautiful writing! Bravo!

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
"...when you disappear...you leave me burning like a tear."
All of these verses are profoundly lovely...but...for some reason
this line literally jumped into my soul.

Reviewed on October 12, 2003
This was so beautiful, outstandingly written, I enjoyed this so much this morning!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2003
My dearest Sara!

This is just SO exquisite!

Surely Christina Rossetti would have been proud of you.

This gorgeous poem is in the finest English Romantic tradition.

All hail to one of England's finest poetesses of the early 21st. Century!

Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
Canada


Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on October 8, 2003
Sara, this is a lovely piece and after hearing/seeing you recire 'Missing' it would be outstanding to view this as well. I really like the audio/video clip. Great idea, I know that you've told me how to do it and I believe that I will, soon. :) It makes me think that I 'really' know you. (((HUGS)))

Love, JC xoxoxo
PS I love your voice/accent

Reviewed by Erica Adams (Reader)
Reviewed on October 3, 2003
Very interesting. I enjoyed this write.

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on October 3, 2003
A very unusual but captivating poem

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
very well done. i'm in awe!

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
You have scaled the heights here sweetie, capturing the beautiful lilting rhythms of the romantics without having to resort to versifying.
The theme put me in mind somewhat of "To His Coy Mistress" by Andrew Marvell.
Andrew Marvell was a quiet, solitary man who ran a specialist comic shop in Kingston upon Hull ~ until he was confronted by bad poetry and then he became MARVELLMAN. Oops, wrong place for surreal flights of fancy.
love
Ian

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Very intense and interesting, this satirical work is of esoteric excellence.

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Very unique this one is.

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
This is so excellent. Creative to the max.
I could almost hear Sean Connery reciting it with pride.

Reviewed by Helga Ross
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Excellent!
I really enjoyed this.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Sara,

I am in standing ovation Clapping....
" "In sweaters and sad pyjamas, lie
Man and Woman, Love and Fate
and on their lips all sweet words die
in their grim master bed of hate
and Man shall grimly mow the lawn
and Woman, grimly wash the floor
and Time has turned their love to scorn
For them, as for so many more."

Excellent reading...
Peg


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