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Keep Your Eyes Closed
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Wednesday, November 6, 2019 Rated "G" by the Author.

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KEEP YOUR EYES CLOSED splendiferoushoney: by Martin at hipydeus The past calls. A past filled with parties. Balls held at the castle. Dancers in the moonlight. Close your eyes. A carriage waits for you. You arrive at the castle. Footmen escort you. You ascend the staircase, wearing your new ball gown. A man leads you to the dance floor. Close your eyes. Yes, it is a dream. Keep your eyes closed, and sway to the music.
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Reviewed by Susanne Leist

Reviewed on November 10, 2019

Thank you, Ronald Hull,

You can always be expected to turn a positive daydream into a negative experience.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on November 10, 2019

And just hope that your carriage is not a pumpkin when you leave the ball. A lovely fantasy of a lovely experience that very few women throughout history ever got to experience. Much better than a dark poem, but not realistic for women of the Middle Ages where nobles enjoyed wealth and regal lives at the expense of their serfs. Women working their fingers to the bone to provide for such extravagant parties.

Ron

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 9, 2019

A lovely soothing dream
Love and peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 8, 2019

Beautiful dream!

Sandie

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on November 8, 2019

In my case, judging from my past, I definately "will" keep my eyes cloed. Enjoyed your work on this one, Susanne.

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on November 8, 2019

LOVED THE WAY YOU WRAPPED YOUR WORDS SO ARTISTICALLY AROUND THIS PICTURE! INDEED, IT IS THE TIME OF YEAR WHEN, IN THE RIGHT PLACE AT THE RIGHT TIME...WITH EYES CLOSED, WE CAN SEE WHAT USED TO BE. THANKS FOR SHARING, SUSANNE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Michael Schafer

Reviewed on November 7, 2019

This must be the day for poems about dreams. First Johb, then Odin and now yours. I think I'll just go back to bed and dream some more.

Reviewed by Mystic Rose

Reviewed on November 7, 2019

With such amazing beauty I did more then take a peek, sorry ! I loved it Susanne, have a great day.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on November 6, 2019

The only time I keep my eyes closed is first thing in the morning when I am standing at my mirror. I don't want to see how much of a monster I look like just after waking up...-e-

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 6, 2019

Lovely and dreamy, makes me think of Cinderella (who else?). Nicely done, Susanne. Love, peace, and best wishes,

Regis. 🍁😊

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