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Just A Shell
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This poem is about a beautiful lass I know, who was feeling discarded from a relationship that had just ended. Rejected and depressed by the feeling that she had messed up on an opportunity for a good relationship, she turned to me for some words of consolation, and so I wrote, Just a Shell.


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By A. L. Baxter
Copyright © March 19, 2011 Ayon L. Baxter. All rights reserved 

Do you feel like a shell washed ashore?
Feeling alone; empty; bare?
Waiting for a wave to take your lifeless body fore;
Lettin’ go; an end to care?

Yet a shell seems as hard as a rock
Shining inside with delicate beauty splendour
Will be someone's treasure; off the rack
A change, a new, in the hands of a fondler

You are not alone; look around at us!
We are the rocks, the stones; 
Other shells; grains of sand innumerous!
We love your colours, shades; your tones.

Now wait till you see what I will be,
When turned upside-down; my face to the Son.
His light from above illumines me
Then you’ll see how my heart is won!

(Inspired by a Sea Shell and a dear troubled Lass)

 


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 Reviews of "Just A Shell"
Reviewed by Ayon Baxter
Reviewed on December 16, 2018
Thank you all for your comments. I am encouraged by hearing from you, especially that the poem gained a personal application to each individual.

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on February 2, 2015
Shine on! Especially like this: "Now wait till you see what I will be,
When turned upside-down; my face to the Son."

Reviewed by lois christensen
Reviewed on December 29, 2014
So sad, so true, life must begin again, when - in the future. I like this poem very much, tells the truth about breaking up too.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 29, 2014
A beautiful analogy of how even the empty shell of love can be attractive and shine again.

Ron

Reviewed by Kathy Parenteau
Reviewed on December 29, 2014
This is so beautiful!

Kathy J Parenteau


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