She is the rising star in the evening sky
alive and sparkling with spiritual glow
marvellous and incredible , no one comes near
to her pure spirit and innocent soul
soft smile beckons her warrior man
his hand to her heart , two angels divine
Energy radiating in brilliant incandescence
Waxing and waning , mysterious moon so fond
gentleness of a fawn , tender touch of velvet
architect of the way , with her words of gold
blossom of heaven , everlasting tree of truth
creator and usher of a wondrous world
Rapture and joy is her holy secrete
again and again , she brings it to the fore
cradle of thrills , disarming design
forward momentum in unstoppable drive
delaying and prolonging with effortless skill
sweet warmth and liquid spill
of passion unrivalled
Wrapped in the blanket of divine devotion
two sentinels on the turrets
bewitched with each other
single purpose of hidden intent
solitary mission of sublime mystery
the illusion of the world
discerned and dispelled
Hey Peter!
This is quite descriptive. Interesting title if I do say so myself. Keep it up!
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2005
She is the rising star in the evening sky
alive and sparkling with spiritual glow
marvellous and incredible , no one comes near
to her pure spirit and innocent soul
soft smile beckons her warrior man
his hand to her heart , two angels divine
"The Way of the Pagan Girl" is served on a platinum tray sorrounded with anbrosias... Through the lines of this poem, magnificence is glowing with the intensity of knowledge, beauty and grace, singing the majestic of the poetic art.
Thank You for posting "The Way of the Pagan Girl", and for enriching
the pages of Poetry.
There's the magical quality of the Court of King Arthur about these writes, coupled with the divine intensity of Biblical allusion - a heady and intoxicating combination for those of feebler sensibilities, like me!! Have you thought of releasing these as a sequence, or as a themed collection? They are so potent that each one is like ambrosial elixir in itself - worthy of Gandalf or Merlin himself! Let's hear it for the good guys who make all the gals feel like Guinevere!! (sp?!) Another sensual banquet, thank you! Kate xx
You have once again taken the reader on a magical ride so exceptionally crafted as to leave one completely spellbound by your poetic excellence ... superb!!
Our culture has taught us to believe in many ideas which aren't actually real. Exposing these illusions allows us to recover the power to live our lives according to our deepest desires.
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This is quite descriptive. Interesting title if I do say so myself. Keep it up!
alive and sparkling with spiritual glow
marvellous and incredible , no one comes near
to her pure spirit and innocent soul
soft smile beckons her warrior man
his hand to her heart , two angels divine
..truly a momentous stanza..
Vesna
Thank You for posting "The Way of the Pagan Girl", and for enriching
the pages of Poetry.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
You have once again taken the reader on a magical ride so exceptionally crafted as to leave one completely spellbound by your poetic excellence ... superb!!
Best wishes,
Robert
great poem
Gina
Amy
Love Tinka
an outstanding, richly illustrated piece--well done, poet!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
beautiful flow and vision in your pen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Splendid poetry Peter!... Eileen