Geisha Girl (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

a gem, Peter ...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

Such a beautiful poem and format, Peter!! Pretty lady, too.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

What lovely verse, indeed! A winner, Peter.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

Cool culture pleaser, Peter! I can hear the Japanese zither in tune with this. I burn a Japanese incense, they are called joss sticks. The resin is sensuous as is the Geisha dance.

Sage

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

As lovely as the geisha in the picture. Beautiful match, Peter!;-)

eT

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

Very good Peter!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

A beauty Peter!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

Indeed adorable,
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

Love this form. I can see how it originated in song, as the last line is shorter for emphasis. Simply beautiful, Peter...Lin

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

Ah, I love the simplicity of truth in this Peter.
Beautiful.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

oh this is so well done

know why???

because even if you had not posted a photo, I would have seen her thru your words........

kudos!!
pax A

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

what a gorgeous poem and photo! this is a form that I've never heard of and must try!

Susan

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

Peter,

Domo arigato. :) This is so beautiful...both illustration and verse.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

Yep, that red winnowing face is truly an eye=thought catcher, I agree with Janet. Beautiful poetry.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

Geisha poem...you've done it again Peter.
Your progress gets more beautiful everyday.
You ecel my poetic friend.
Love this !
The picture is just as alluring as the Geisha poem.
Susan

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

Poet Master, I salute your Dodoitsu; and I bet your Geisha Girl will, too.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

You are a master at all the formats. The pic is devine.

Reviewed by Janet Bellinger

Reviewed on March 13, 2006

You Dodoitsu is perfect, Peter. I like the red, winnowing fan.

Janet