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Genesis
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 " We didn't lose the game; we just ran out of time."
-Vince Lombardi "

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Where does life begin, and where does life end

is not everything sacred under the sun

we stand condemned by our perceptions

prompting us to re-evaluate our misconceptions

that we experience between dawn and dusk

is one species of life greater than another

and by whose authority do we dutifully slaughter

God's creatures that roam the Earth

who walked this planet before Man arrived with a Big Bang

and set himself up as Lord of All he surveyed

and decided who should live and die

with presumptious and breathtaking arrogance

as they drain the globe of its vital minerals and elements

and deplete the rivers and the forests

destroying and exhausting our natural resources

sowing their acidic discord in the clouds

and waging war on their neighbourly kin

a more bloodthirsty lot you could not find

between the poles or under the Sun

and now that the chips are all down

and Satan is calling in his markers

as we view the yawning chasm

that stretches before our very eyes

we cast our minds back to our childhood

and remember the words of our Paw

Adam failed the first test set before him

and as a stark and sobering result

 this Fallen World must die

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006
 

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 Reviews of "Genesis"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 12, 2006
according to the premise that satan is calling his markers, doesn't god have the upper hand? is the world really dieing or is civilization transforming? there is no creation without destruction ... chaos and order go hand in hand ... upheaval is inevitable, rebirth is undeniable ...

excellent poem, Peter ...

Reviewed on April 12, 2006
A great write, even if it is a little filled with depression. But, there is still hope...
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by A. Santo (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2006
Peter my friend this Fallen World is dieing. The greed and avarice of humanities, religons and governments are the most critical ingredients in our own poisoning. Some refuse to reach outside of our safe zones and drink from the sacreligous thoughts that - War is a part of Evolution. No, no its not. War is the path to extinction. And when one life is taken in hate and greed then an entire world dies right along with them. Their blood is red just like mine and yours. We kill our own selves and we do it without ever stopping to think of a different approach to existing together in harmony with respect.

But on a more lighter and brighter side of thought: "Behold I saw a New Heaven and a New Earth" recorded John of Patmos. There is a vision well worth remembering.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on April 11, 2006
wow, you are a deep thinker and I love it!

Reviewed on April 11, 2006
Excellent write, Peter; very well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on April 11, 2006
I believe in Charles Darwin and Evolution, survival of the fittest and National Geographic is my Bible and survival of the fittest all plays out on the plains of the Serengeti, "a more bloodthirsty lot you could not find" as it is survival. Only the strong prevail, the weak are the Devil's supper! Strong poem, Peter! Victory at all costs, victory in spite of terror, victory no matter how long and hard the road may be. Blood, toil, sweat, and tears!

Sage

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 11, 2006
"is one species of life greater than another?"



I personally don't think so - since all species are so thoroughly intertwined on this planet we call Earth, and in this thing we call life - and every form of life has a purpose.



"a more bloodthirsty lot you could not find"



I couldn't agree more, Peter.



"this Fallen World must die"



And that, I truly believe as well.


Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 11, 2006
Yes ! Nature even gives us the most beautiful blossoms of Spring...they die...winter the first snow...it melts...living ...we die...HOWEVER..and I'll stand for this part..after the buds die we look forward to another season and after the winter ice melts the world warms for new birth and every living creature reproduces and we continue with the faith that it will keep up the renewal.
I'm a believer Peter...in the smallest iota of a detail and when I die...my eyes will live in my grandchildren and my talent for art in my daughter and so..I believe in this immortlity that comes with living and passing on the beauty of positive footsteps that I left behind.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 11, 2006
I belief in Jesus Christ Our Lord!!

An Jerry.....a B B Q will not be bad right now....I can eat a mule for that matter!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on April 11, 2006
Peter,

LOL at Jerry's comment. :)

An outstanding write, thought provoking and well penned. BRAVO!

No arguement here, either. I believe in God. :) Would be a fool not to!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2006
No argument here. Find me a goat who cann give me one good reason why I shouldn't B-B-Q him and I'll give up my evil ways.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 11, 2006
Bet you get a lot of arguements on this one! Suffice it to say I believe in Creator and all He has told me!;-)Great write Peter!

Love,
Eileen


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