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The Art of Victory
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" If you kow the enemy, and know yourself, you need not fear the results of a hundred battles "

                                                                             Sun Tzu

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The Crusader knight sets off on his trusted steed again

to do battle with the gathering forces of darkness once more

he is a seasoned warrior, who knows the ways of war

experience has taught him, you must mix up your tactics to prevail

to do the unexpected, throws the enemy into dissaray and confusion 

and means you can predict his each and every move

for a modern day soldier is equipped for a battle royale

the keys to victory are diverse, there is no golden rule

suffice to say to obtain superiority

you must be absolutely certain of conquering your greatest enemy, fear

he executes his battle plan, with precision like accuracy

severing the opposition's supply lines, and striking with sheer conviction

psychologically damaging, your opponent way deep down inside

the knight of arms is ultra confident,  for his preparation is meticulous

the war is already won, secured within his mind

and as the hostilities are started, the winning strategy takes effect

fortune favors the brave, and flexibility triumphs everytime

and on the grand chess board of life,

this knight will always checkmate the king

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006

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 Reviews of "The Art of Victory"
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
Well said Peter and you know of my stand...I understand that the battle is not mine...but His.

Reviewed on June 3, 2006
Good advice, Peter!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
How often we approach our battles seemingly prepared and overly confident thinking the war is already won only to discover the tenacity and trickery of the opposition. And what if our greatest enemy lies within outselves on life's chessboard?
I love the way this challenges the mind...
Taylor

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
there are many battels to endure, the greatest is within ourselves ... an excellent allegorical work ...

Reviewed on June 3, 2006
A wonderful write, Peter. Just wish the last three lines would be always true... Excellent work,
B&R

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
The ART here is in the portrayal of this chessboard with the ever echoing word...checkmate.
You place the reader in the battle.
Love and peace
Susan

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
I love the ending on this one. Well done!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
Great write Peter but I am not sure if the Crusades were as noble a cause as religion and the church would have us believe, perhaps if more tolerance had been displayed instead of mass genocide back then todays political climate may be a little bit different.

Reviewed by A. Santo (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
"As a man thinks, so IS he." Victory comes to those who BELIEVE - in all areas of life. No one is exempt. We are not seperated from our thoughts. The evidence is in our actions. "As Above, So Below", plant the seed, watch it grow. ;) Good day to you dear man, GOOD DAY... :D

Reviewed by Joy Marsh
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
Peter~

The last two lines hit home for me in your powerful poem!!

Reviewed by Michael Wells (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
Hope your knight has the conviction of peace as he does with war
Beautiful write
God bless - Mick

Reviewed by Huda Orfali
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
But never the Queen :)
Well done, Peter
love and peace

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
Powerfully spoken Peter!
Especially the phrase: "and striking with sheer conviction."

Sometimes finese has to be tossed out the window, so to speak, when one is pursuing their convictions.

Until one pursues something passionately themselves, at the cost of being ridiculed or misunderstood, they will never know the great joy of living on the edge of expectancy in the hopes of a brighter and more definitive tomorrow.

Good job!
Richard

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
You tell the story quite well.

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
... THOU ART THE MASTER CRUSADER, THE GALLANT KNIGHT, THE TRUEST OF WARRIORS, WHO SERVES OUR LIVING GOD, WITH A CHRIST-CENTERED HEART AND MIND. TRIUMPH IS IN THY HAND, BECAUSE THOU SERVEST A TRIUMPHANT SAVIOUR; THOU ALREADY KNOWEST THE END! LEAD US ON, O GALLANT ONE, TO OUR ULTIMATE VICTORY WE RIDE, FEARLESS, AT THY SIDE!

THE LORD OUR GOD IS GLORIFIED BY YOU, PETER! I WILL PRAISE HIM OPENLY FOR GIVING US...YOU, TO LEAD THE WAY!


ready?................... "THANK YOU, JESUS, FOR SIR PETER PATON!!!"
faith & love ~ rhonda

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
(((Peter )))

precious man, this is so true is the victory of the battle to those that always seek light, and truth…This can be accomplished on earth , yet earth school is just what it is - a classroom of learning. And if everyone had the grace and love you had we would all be at love and peace within, no need to harm others. I saw the Al Qeada on television yesterday and they said their number one agenda is world hate for people everywhere. I am convinced it is their laws of hatred they are taught as small children. That was the "root".. Gosh, what troubled people to hate that much, that they can’t help but hate themselves…I cannot even imagine it. Maybe when they see their life review in Heaven they will see just how sad they made our loving Father and they will feel sad they did what they did… Prayers and more prayers… Just as you have said before their day is coming where they will face God and I’m sure it won’t be very comfortable… You know the human carnality of ego, pride is massive. And yes it’s carnal, carnal, carnal…That is why many live not by spirit, but through carnality…Your devotion to the human cause of love and humanitarian causes continue to astonish me. Your heart is truer than the rarest gold….
I have rounded up some beautiful quotes I know you’ll really like about the light within us … Enjoy and have a wonderful day… (((Love & Peace, Dove ))))

We are each gifted in a unique and important way. It is our privilege and our adventure to discover our own special light. ~Mary Dunbar))))
There are two ways of spreading light; to be the candle or the mirror that reflects it. ~Edith Wharton ))))
The hero is the one who kindles a great light in the world, who sets up blazing torches in the dark streets of life for men to see by. The saint is the man who walks through the dark paths of the world, himself a light. ~Felix Adler))))
When you possess light within, you see it externally. ~Anaïs Nin ))))))
Dare to reach out your hand into the darkness, to pull another hand into the light. ~Norman B. Rice ))))
The windows of my soul I throw
Wide open to the sun.
~John Greenleaf Whittier




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
Gotta love it, Master Peter, you spelled it out and kept it simple, for the dullards like myself. To go into battle you must absolutely go into it with an "I'm right" attitude and a desire to get the job done. Now if we could just get the kind to quit meddling, the knights could take care of things.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
Peter I wish we had you teaching this To all our brave military, and also educating the people who don't understand why there are times battles must be fought! Fantastic poem full of wisdom!

Love,
eT


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