naked rain (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Oh, my............this one's s c a r y, Fee. Hope you're okay.......

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

hmmm..now you have me thinking..and a little worried..:(

I hope this is fiction and not a reflection of your state of soul,heart and mind.

Vesna

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

"the heart forgot the clock." Love it.

Reviewed by Gloria Gay

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

What a wonderful depiction of a "mood" that comes to us sometimes, either triggered by an event or a memory. The theme is universal, though the poem may have been inspired by personal happenings.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

Sounds like a sad acceptance.............
hope things look better soon
pax A

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

Oh, Fee. You sound. . .depressed? "naked in the rain" conveys the mood perfectly. Chills a n d draws. Cold's in my bones, and I
feel the peeling. . .better not read it again 'til later. Now go inside and put on your woolies and a nice, warm pair of slippers.
Then write to me and tell me you are All Better. Love ya!
'Pea' <3 ~~~ PS: Thank you so much for being so supportive. Means the world! ~~~PS2~~What I forgot. Don't understand "nse." Am I
being dense? Wouldn't doubt it.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

Sweet

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

Emotive offering Felix!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

Wonderful writing, Fee; well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

Awesome, deep emotional poetry my friend.

~Linda

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

Intense in thought...nicely done Felix...

Myrna

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

This is a sad poem in analysis. Yet we must all hope for better days. Victor

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

you have some very deep thoughts in this verse, relayed in an intriguing manner!

Susan

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Felix this one is poetry in motion well expressed.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Excellent Felix...the emotional grip in this verse is clear. I enjoyed much.

Allen

Reviewed by Antoinette Kopperfield

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

I really enjoyed the last stanza. It is a thinking poem and you did a wonderful job.
Antoinette

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Geez, I'd have to go along with Susan -- this poem really makes you think, and it does give new meaning to being bare to the bone. Sexy picture to go with it, you devil you! Very nice poem, Fee.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Our heart is exposed when it is broken, and like a clock that's lost its hands it just ticks on endllessy no longer fulfilling its purpose.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

When the heart is forlorned the travel takes us all into a naked rain. I don't think I've ever realized this mood before but it sure grasps at the meaning of being bared to the bone.
Love,
Susn

I babare soul to the Northwind