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What Could Have Been
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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This is fiction and came to me after a weekend away playing at kitchen parties in the country...


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What Could Have Been


 


I could give you phony promises


Vows that we both know won’t come true


I could make a list that you can wish


Of things I’d love to someday do for you


That’s an easy way I know for some


Who don’t care that they cause pain


I guess I just can’t be a man like that


So I’ll tell you the sad truth once again


 


Chorus


 


No, there is no happy forever after


No, there’s no golden wedding band


For I don’t have my heart to give


I hope you can understand


When the bar shuts down at midnight


I’ll go quickly goodnight is all I’ll say


A sad goodbye in the parking lot


That’s the way we’ll have to stay


 


Chorus:


Yes, I felt the spark… of love’s design


And yes, I wished… you could be mine


Your kiss a taste of could have been…


please let me go, for I don’t know,


if I can resist that kind of sin


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "What Could Have Been"
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Felix, this is the kinda thing I look for PURE HONESTY, then there wouldn't be as many marriages falling apart, like my first one. I'd love to hear you sing this. Fantastic.
Love you Cuz, Rose XOXO

Reviewed on January 18, 2007
Is this Country Fee?
This is Beautiful and so real!
Glad your honest! EVEN with yourself!!!
Nice 2 know...

WArmest HuGs, Warrior Sheeeooxx

Reviewed by Debra Harmes-Kurth (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Like the lyrics, what kind of music do you have in mind for this?
debra

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
This is good, Fee. I love the lyrics. Do you have the music in mind, too? Excellent song, my friend.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Good Lyrics and message Fee!

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
oh yeah great lyrics
and all of what the others have said :)
enjoyed it!!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
honest love is always the best option ... excellent song poem, Felix ...

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Great lyrics here Fee~
Temptation as such, is not usually fought off so honestly, and thats what makes this write unique and believable...but I think most men would just, "go for it!"
...or could it be that I am one of those women, who have had the wrong experiences, and therefore, I stereotype...?
Enjoyed this , it made me think, even if it is 1:00am!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
There is always something or someone tempting us to waiver from our path, and sometimes the temptation seems so sweet and refreshing that we toy with the idea for a moment. The sad truth is that there are no greener pastures unless they are filled with manure. Nice write!!! It is good to see that there are men who are noble and possess high moral character, Felix, loyalty is extra points in my book.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Ah, the forbidden! Nice write, perfect for a song. R

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
A moving song poem Fee!
Have you played on your guitar with Lennie?
In terms of the love thing: I like to call it 'happily forever Now'!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Great write, beautiful lyrics...great picture, that's the CHIPS guy...what's his name??? Great fictional write...this could be a great country song, what could have been. Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Very good Fee and I'd love to hear you sing. Can you provide that for us oneday soon? Playing in the country you say...what kind of music and do you have a madolin playing with you?
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Sounds good to me! What key are we singing that on??

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Looks like this will make a lovely song. Victor

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
I enjoyed this poem and can relate to it, I always think of what could have been with my life and aspects of it.....

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Excellent verse and rhythm and rhyme .The sadish subject too was very well done and moving.
Best wishes always to you and yours Felix.
From
Kay

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
This would make a great song Fee. Great write. Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
A lyricist with a tune to spoon.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
i think this is well done--as well as a sad reality for some

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Sounds all too familar in this Jo's life..Brilliant Fee..I never knew you wrote such wonderful chorus!!

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Felix, this is very good!

Susan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Enjoyed this one Felix!!

Better not to make promises that can never be....you so right!!

Hey still want to hear you sing OKAY!!!!!!

Love Tinka


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