In life’s sad unfolding, unforgiving play

Take a bow Fee, this was outstanding!!!!!! Hugs, Peggy

Fee,
This is both sad, and very passionate. Me, being in the theater world, can relate totally to this poem.. Thank you for your passion and heartfelt sadness...
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

In this drama called life, and the wonder of a live play is sometimes a small change can make the play come alive again. Nice starter. Lady J

Yes Fee - this reminds me of Mr Shakespeare, the drama of love stories - great read Fee, Nicky x

Heartbreaking emotion expressed so well. Lydi**

Well penned Felix!!

Love Tinka :(

I love the thoughts behind each line HERE Sweet Fee
Your mind is playing games with thee'
Good luck deciding!
when the curtains raise up again!
Deep lasting metaphors!
I love this poem, and great title!
WArmed in Inner Peace, Light, LOVE, and Wisdom! Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox

Stay Positive!
STay SAFE!

"All the world's a stage,
and each one merly players who struts and frets
then is heard no more"....WS
BUT...I would like more..
Thanks Fee,

Walt

Ah yes, they say life is like a stage play, rehearsed but always a moment when some cue is missed. I really liked this one Fee, a little different from the norm. I like that.

Very good metaphor for life. Well-done Felix. ~ Sara

Excellent writing dear man,you stay safe and well ok,see you when I get back...Hugssss
Love,
Chanti Lace

Love this one, Fee! Trouble is, the script is always being revised and new tickets are always being printed and sold for the next venue, so the curtain is never truly final. Ah, sometimes we wish to never again have to ride that blamed bus.

Ted

"Rehearsed, rehashed my tepid lines I say
In life’s sad unfolding, unforgiving play"

I love those lines and I'm grateful life doesn't have to be that way. We are born and taught by society to act and perform a certain way, but as individuals we always have a choice and I'm afraid I'm about as nonconformist as they come. Abiding by the laws of the land is one thing, becoming a puppet something else. I'm sure there is probably a lighter meaning behind this...that I'm not getting, but I'm taking it as I read it. As always I enjoyed. Elizabeth

The music theme of Mash have a phrase that says "suicide is painless"
Who are they kidding?
That final curtain are bring down with the great pain of all.
It falls after once on your life performance.
When tears are falling without the applause it is not time to take a bow but to try again until a Life's standing ovation is heard.
Georg

No ham ever went without a curtain call

You forgot to take you're Bows.....C'mon now, head down, bum up Sir Felix Leroy of Perry.

:)Cherry pie with whipped cream on top

why is that line in bold?
at first i thought perhaps it was what you said but im not sure that works or is all you said so im slightly puzzled.

i like the way you question
will i break her heart in act 3...?
it seems like such a careless question in some ways but then... if you KNEW you were gonna do it would you avoid that act perhaps? or maybe rewrite it or even just improv on the night and make something completely else up... i dont know...
but its an interesting question...

As n actor, one can have a final curtain call, as a human I don't think so, for life does not end in death. Death really has no sting. Victor

Hey Kat,
Not every body get'z a final call or a cue real only a special few but i get your scribe & already took My cue.

No skinny dick'z or fat lady'z sing'n or standing ovation & nah applause.
For I AM not in love with been'n famously famous for infamy last 4 eva & 4 eva beat'z 15 minute'z.
I AM just that 4 eva.

Love'n'Light

Blessed Be ! ! !

Gypsy.xxx

well written poem-your writing seems so forlorn

Bravo, Encore,We all want the most when there'll be no more.Jen

No final curtain call for you my friend. Life's journey is not at an end. A standing ovation for your work I foresee. She will forgive, we always do, and happiness will be all for you. You have penned this very beautifully and oh so very well, my heart aches with each tear that falls.
Ann

Fantastic Fee. You gotta love this one.
Hugs,
Marcia

Wonderful write as usual,I bet I know where this one is coming from.
Good Luck, you will be great darlin.

Love you cuz, xoxo
Selena

Sweetpea! You are a beautiful, gentle, carin man! You will always be the hero and adored by all! HUGS! SC

This delivers a powerhouse of a message, Felix...you've upstaged yourself on this one...not a thread of reluctance in this voice...I'm taking the autographed program to put in my hope chest...thank you for this brilliant analogy which has played itself out...be well...Blessed Be.

Love,
Sage

Well Felix I was worried all day when I never saw a post from you, This is another excellent one you are sharing with us, Thank you so much. As usual I look forward to your words.
Love ya Cuz XOXO, Rose