Bitter Gray
By: Fee
Bitter gray was the color of the December sky
when the wind blew cold from the North
the tree branches could only sigh
Bitter gray the ocean’s froth churned by the sea
each crest an angry bitter frown
a legacy of all that was you and me
Bitter gray are the snowflakes falling to the ground
vague little memories come calling
now that you are no more around
Bitter gray the seagull’s lonely cawing song
joining me in sympathy on my lonely pier
he knows there’s something wrong
Bitter gray is my beard from the tears I wept
so many times because of you
and all the hours I never slept
Bitter gray is the broken heart of sorrow
the very color of sad defined
when the gray hides all tomorrow
Bitter gray will be the final resting place
a broken heart will be at peace
all sorrow gone without a trace…
Sheila
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
at these fatal requests! I don't detest
The color gray is middle of all colors
I really wonder...
Love this poem and your heartfelt style SWEEtie!
as your heart turns warm red today!
Warm hugs and Warmer Blessings, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoxo
STay Positive!
Love Tinka
Beyond the Bitter Gray
Lies a colorful, sunlit day
May this Season of Light bless your heart,
Joseph*
Love you cuz,
Selena
Walt
You captured this tone so well. One of your best!!!
...Michael
Love,
Susan
I think that the title and the repetition of "bitter gray" throughout the poem are an excellent choice.
"Bitter gray is my beard from the tears I wept
so many times because of you
and all the hours I never slept"... my favorite lines.
Axilea
Really loved this piece. The monotones and absence of color really set the emotions. And your format. Sometimes rhyme can almost add a whimsical feel to the most serious poems. This layout keeps reinforcing the sentiment of the piece.
Bravo. Perfect sensations. One of your best.
Sweets--RaeLynn
I'm okay, just waiting for my AD membership to kick back in. Hope it's soon! :(
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Stunning pic!
Love,
Becca~
Christine
Love ya Cuz XOXOXO, Rose
(((HUGS))), love and Merry Christmas,
Karla.