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Bitter Gray
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Driving home just before dawn with a minus 15 wind chill, the frozen lake, sky trees, snow...all seemed to be different shades of gray and that is what inspired this...special thanks to cousin Rose for her tips, suggestions and finding the perfect graphic for this...


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Bitter Gray


By: Fee


 


Bitter gray was the color of the December sky


when the wind blew cold from the North


the tree branches could only sigh


 


Bitter gray the ocean’s froth churned by the sea


each crest an angry bitter frown


a legacy of all that was you and me


 


Bitter gray are the snowflakes falling to the ground


vague little memories come calling


now that you are no more around


 


Bitter gray the seagull’s lonely cawing song


joining me in sympathy on my lonely pier


he knows there’s something wrong


 


Bitter gray is my beard from the tears I wept


so many times because of you


and all the hours I never slept


 


Bitter gray is the broken heart of sorrow


the very color of sad defined


when the gray hides all tomorrow


 


Bitter gray will be the final resting place


a broken heart will be at peace


all sorrow gone without a trace…


 


 


 


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "Bitter Gray"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on December 22, 2007
I like the format you used on this poem - it really emphasizes the emotion accompanying the imagery. This one has a sad feel to it. I love the second to last verse especially. Excellent poem, Fee!
Sheila

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on December 21, 2007
Here is some healing energy Fee, turning your gray to amber, a color to warm your heart and soul! I love you Fee, and know that you are going to be healthy of mind and spirit once again...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on December 19, 2007
sending you a nice warm red muffler to chase that gray away...burrrr winter

Reviewed on December 19, 2007
Bitter Gray my heart was left
at these fatal requests! I don't detest
The color gray is middle of all colors
I really wonder...
Love this poem and your heartfelt style SWEEtie!
as your heart turns warm red today!
Warm hugs and Warmer Blessings, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoxo
STay Positive!

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on December 19, 2007
I love the repetition of "Bitter Gray", and graceful leading from nature to self, to purging. I especially liked my reaction-- immersion. Great read! --Charlie

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2007
So sad, so sweet, so touching and neat. I like your style.

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2007
You bring out the coldness in a broken heart here. Lady J

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 19, 2007
The imagery is gray and touching,,melancholic!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2007
Dear Fee,

Beyond the Bitter Gray
Lies a colorful, sunlit day

May this Season of Light bless your heart,
Joseph*

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 19, 2007
excellent imagery, Felix ...

Reviewed on December 19, 2007
Bitter grey is somewhat how I have been feeling these past months darlin and you have certainly captured my mood but still I love this season for all it represents in our hearts. It subsides with the help of my hubby,children and grandchildren thankfully. Great write.

Love you cuz,
Selena

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on December 19, 2007
Bitter grey the ocean....Man when it does that it is in a nasty mood.

Walt

Reviewed on December 19, 2007
Fee,
You captured this tone so well. One of your best!!!

...Michael

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
Beautifully sad piece...splendid scribe

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
Not just gray but the bitter gray that is a depression the heart enshrouds for it's own protection. You. sweet Felix, are a passionate man who realizes the moods associated with love and romance.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Gloria Gay
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
Truly sets the scene for the sea and a lost love. Well done, Fee.

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
I have enjoyed reading this poem that has a perfectly coherent atmosphere from beginning to end.

I think that the title and the repetition of "bitter gray" throughout the poem are an excellent choice.

"Bitter gray is my beard from the tears I wept
so many times because of you
and all the hours I never slept"... my favorite lines.

Axilea

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
A melancholy poem set off by the dismal gray skies that are prevalent this time of year.

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
Wow, look what I've been missing with the notifications not working.

Really loved this piece. The monotones and absence of color really set the emotions. And your format. Sometimes rhyme can almost add a whimsical feel to the most serious poems. This layout keeps reinforcing the sentiment of the piece.

Bravo. Perfect sensations. One of your best.

Sweets--RaeLynn

Reviewed on December 18, 2007
I detect sadness in this one, Fee; hope you are okay! Know you are in my thoughts and prayers!

I'm okay, just waiting for my AD membership to kick back in. Hope it's soon! :(

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Stunning pic!

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
Brrrrrrrrr........... As I said, stay warm!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed on December 18, 2007
Wonderful write. I know what bitter gray feels like, I think we all do from time to time in our lives. Hopefully the gray will change to sunny yellow one day. Love the pic!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
a perfect photo for your well written poem

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
You've captured this steely-chill so well, Felix, in the blade of your rapier pen. Mood, tone, form and subject all combine perfectly to give us this brilliant portrait of la vie en monotone. Love the way it ends.... all that fog evaporating! :)) Love, Kate xx

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
This make me think about spring when things turn green and rainbows of flowers bloom, and the chill is again out of the air.,, and we feel revivied. Love this Fee
Christine

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
Gray can truly be a very bitter color, especially in the stark, cold winter.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
Very heart wrenching words that hit my heart dear Cuz, Sweet as from your heart but sad as to where they lead. Thank you for sharing.

Love ya Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed on December 18, 2007
Chillingly illustrated and penned, (((Fee))), and I thought it was cold here. *shiver* Well done.

(((HUGS))), love and Merry Christmas,

Karla.


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