Miss All Night Special
By: Fee
She leaned her boobs in the open window
Of his rusted, seen better days, Cadillac
Smiled saying sir you want a good time
You know I have a special knack
She said I don’t do front seat quickies
I’m an all night special kind of girl
For a hundred bucks old timer
I’ll take you all around the world
She was too many years past her prime
Then again not half as old as he
I think I’ll have the all night special
She smiled and said sounds fine to me
He paid all her fee in cash up front
Then took her across town to his home
She looked around the house a moment
The lack of frills said he lived alone
He poured them both some sweet red wine
Lighting candles he dimmed the light
He held out his hand, took her in his arms
Somehow they slow danced away the night
Naked they seemed more man and wife
As they sat there on the edge of that feather bed
He said I’ve loved and lost too many hearts
Now they’re just sweet memories in my head
So he told her true that he was dying
Only a few more months at the most
A cold shiver passed between them
The Cancer’s echo of a coming ghost
Laying down they spent the night together
In her arms she held him safe and tight
Let him weep his teardrops on her shoulder
For once knowing she was doing something right
In the morning she made them both breakfast
Sipped coffee as she watched him shave
Later they took a lover’s walk in the park
She returned the money he had gave
She never went back to the life she lived
From that moment they shared everything
He read to her from Byron and Shelly
And one day he gave to her a wedding ring
Never-Never Land they knew could never last
And one night the Dark Angel finally came
Holding her hand he slipped away smiling
At his Miss All Night Lady without shame…
Beautifully told and touching. I wasn't expecting the twist. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Brilliant.
Amira
Love Tinka
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Carole~
Peace,
Dan
one f those romance novels!
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and hugsss...Morning Star
Micke
Sanja xox
This is such a moving poem Fee.
Christine
Wow, this poem is superb. A dying old man finds love in the arms of a most unlikely source. Yes, my friend. Anyone can change if they truly want too. This poem is proof of it. Another amazing story, Fee.
Blessings,
~Linda
Fee, you have written marvellous poems, but none of them will ever kiss the boots of this one.
Oh man...WOW! ! ! !
Georg
I need tissues for my tears. I am very touched by the lovingness of these words. Two lonely people finding their goodness through each other. No-one should ever be judged (no matter the unsavory upfront opinion of any circumstantial appearance) Your words are deep emotion & emit true depths of love. Your heart is very beautiful to be able to write this.
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie