I am sorry I had missed this one for now I feel as though I missed the greatest of all Felix for this is the greatest. I love it. Thank you for sharing.
When I pass (die, expire, pass-away) perhaps my love for the light of my life will pass with me into eternity, but Cupid's bow isn't going to make that happen, Fee. True love, like fine wine, ages well.
Shadows have the quality of put fears in some but tranquility in others, because the absence of light can be felt as cold as a winter night or a veil of peace covering hurting and shy eyes after they cried.
'Memories light the corner of my mind
Misty watercolor memories of the way we were
Scattered pictures of the smiles we left behind
Smiles we gave to one another for the way we were
Can it be that it was oh so simple then
or has time re-written every line?
If we had the chance to do it all again, tell me
would we-could we?'
This poem reminded me of this song. Wish I could write romance
like this. I was once told I wasn't romantic enough. It was a shock to me. But I guess there are some of us who feel deeply yet can't express it so easily(Ever tried your hand at a romantic mystery, Fee? You're good in both genres). Don't shoot the messenger-Cupid. Blame that trickster Eros--he is certainly cruel. Beautiful lines, here...
Some loves last forever, through all seasons and time. I never knew that until this past year of my life, but now I know it to be true. I thought I could never love to the point of no reason, and I could never understand what people meant by a knowing about another, intrinsically, but now I do- it's a beatiful thing. This poem made me think of that kind of thing, and recently, your writings have been exceptional, Felix. Excellent work :) Michelle
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2009
Very beautiful writing sweet man....as always Breath taking sweet Fee..Hugss
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Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose
Lovely writing Fee,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Cherrypie xx
Much Love & Inspirations
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
Sheila
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Georg
Hugs,
Christine
Misty watercolor memories of the way we were
Scattered pictures of the smiles we left behind
Smiles we gave to one another for the way we were
Can it be that it was oh so simple then
or has time re-written every line?
If we had the chance to do it all again, tell me
would we-could we?'
This poem reminded me of this song. Wish I could write romance
like this. I was once told I wasn't romantic enough. It was a shock to me. But I guess there are some of us who feel deeply yet can't express it so easily(Ever tried your hand at a romantic mystery, Fee? You're good in both genres). Don't shoot the messenger-Cupid. Blame that trickster Eros--he is certainly cruel. Beautiful lines, here...
Lin
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Beautiful love poem and the last line was great: "the seasons pass and we will too for Cupid's cruel though love be true."
Mary