Beach Shack Dreaming (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 31, 2009

Beautifully done, Fee. There's something appealing about giving it all up for simpler times and less complications. Your poem is romantic with a haunting touch. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Ankin Timourian

Reviewed on October 22, 2009

Wonderful dream and great imagination. I wish someone can whisper poetry into my ears while relaxing on your beach.
Hugs, Ankin

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on October 22, 2009

Fee, I would love to do the same, but I need that special someone to live there with me...:) I love this poem, I agree with Kate, it could be a song sung with your wonderful guitar.

Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on October 22, 2009

SEA SHANTY!!!!!!!!!!!! I tried to copy and paste the photo of my very favourite place from my old poem "Question", about living on a houseboat/beach shack that look remarkably like this one, Felix! It wouldn't take, but my this takes me back to that poem and I adore yours!!!!!!!!!!!! Everything about this sings and is picture-postcard wish-you-were-here real. One of your very best, and so richly evocative and felt. Sounds totally divine but the line "all my whispered poetry yours to keep" is heart-melting to a poetry-lover! Who could ask for more? This sexy, strapless white dream looks good on YOU! :)) The cornier the better...

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on October 22, 2009

A beautiful Romantic write. Loved it.

Reviewed by kg cummings

Reviewed on October 22, 2009

hmmm... hope your shack is nearby my castle by the sea. We could be neighbors! Hugs, Kathy

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on October 22, 2009

I would live to visit :)
and immerse myself into the sand in many ways :)
Peace & Blessings
Vickie

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

Sounds pretty damn good to me.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

my friend has such a shack we visit, doing many of the things you mentioned ... living there would be a trip (except in the cold ;) ... your poem captures the emotional atmosphere and festive event of such a place ...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

You'd best do that down south somewhere, because if you did it in the area you live in, you'd freeze your, well you know, off...e

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

I can't think of a better dream to wish for. May all yours come true Fee.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

Oh my this does sound divine Fee. Much enjoyed the poem and the romantic thoughts.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

Great imagery, Fee! Loved the lyrical flow of your gripping poem...sounds like a dream to me!

Anna

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

I love this,,,,seems perfect in every way...beautiful Fee
Christine

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

That's not a beach dreaming...like Jasmin's, that's a wet one!!!

Georg

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

Don't know about owning a shack but a weekend romping on the beach alone with my wife sure was a delight and it wasn't only the waves that were pounding.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

Seems you and I (and I'm sure there are many more!) have that same dream, Fee. This is so romantic!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

what a lovely way to spend some time-wonderfully visual write.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

Delightful write, Fee; dream away! :) Sounds nice!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Well done; enjoyed this one~