night shifts (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on December 21, 2010

a hauntingly serene and disarmingly moody melodrama

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on December 18, 2010

An enchanting poem, Fee. I love the line about the lanterns. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on December 16, 2010

this is beautiful Fee
lovely & embracing deep emotions

Haunting Woodlands
Vickie

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 15, 2010

the wee firefly�s light is always the strongest
in shadows where memories are kept
his voice in the whippoorwill entices
where lantern flickering silhouettes have wept

AWESOME!!! condensed, strong images combined with intense emotions make this stanza knockout, Felix! Love the theme. xx

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on December 15, 2010

Very nice, Fee... Dick

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on December 15, 2010

A very sad and moving write Fee.

hug
kathy

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on December 15, 2010

Fee,

What a touching and beautiful poem with great metaphors.

Mary

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on December 15, 2010

What an incredibly beautiful write, Fee! You are so very gifted my friend! Wow!

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on December 15, 2010

VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 15, 2010

Very touching; very sad.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on December 15, 2010

Oh Felix so touching, it breaks my heart. Your words always touch us with a smile, tears or leaving us in Ahh. Greta as usual Cuz.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on December 14, 2010

So spellbinding and intriguing. I feel that you could turn this into a novel...
Lovely work, Fee.

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on December 14, 2010

...some can mourn forever, caught up in love's memories...but who here alive can measure its depths beyond the physical? Love has no boundaries, where tears might seem smudged with mud, they might actually be smearing all borderlines for Love's ultimate release. . . where nothing can stand in its way any longer. . .

Inspiring work, Fee~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on December 14, 2010

Novel love of a book you never want to end, beautiful Fee~
Hugs,
Chrissie

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on December 14, 2010

A tragedy of the greatest agony of love...an intoxicating poem!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on December 14, 2010

It reads like a dirge, Felix and the last stanza I think could very well paraphrase as a metaphorical "death"...not a tagged-on-the-toe morgue expiration...perhaps references to a rendezvous on the night shift on the docks...good time for Otis Redding...Be well.

Love,
Sage