Darkly beautiful, Fee! My own thoughts these days, since the disaster in Japan transpired, are dark as well....it's unimaginable what those poor people are suffering through.....enjoyed this..
Love your dark poem, Felix. The words clearly uphold the picture.
Keep 'em coming.
Don't forget, DEMONS OF JUSTICE is available through Amazon at this time just in case your are interested. I can send a copy for $12 if you are interested. Amazon's price is much higher.
Quite chilling, Fee, but I like dark. There's just as much creativity and talent needed to write it. But then you can write anything. Love and hugs,
Sheila
Powerful write, Felix, and it's grand that you can embrace the dark as well as the light. I think the merging of both light and dark within ourselves makes us more loving, more accepting of others, and non-judging.
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2011
Hey! Dark can be enlightening, Felix. To wander through life's journey wearing rose-colored glasses and not seeing things as they really are is self defeating in my opinion.
This poem involves age-old theories and dark secrets, which, also in my opinion, have yet to be answered, but we need to keep asking them nonetheless.
Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2011
ahhh, this relates quite near to me, as i learned certain very important things too late in life, which at times haunts..but what to do ? Sharing helps. Stay healthy and better and cheerful. This write is very nice but. :)
Often our pain and darkness comes from some illness or limitation which may be lifted- perhaps by being lifted out on to the page.
Dark chords leave room for resolution.
Feel better- but no need to write better.
Well done,
Suspenseful and close to home, Rain of Deception 2 will leave you in Tears. Much like Part 1, this will shocking sequel will keep you on the edge of your fingertips.
A page-turning novel about a relationship between best friends that is interrupted because of betrayal , deceit, sexual promiscuity and pregnancy happens!
Rovella is a beautiful woman with a cold heart whom blames herself for an unfortunate old family secret that is literally ruining her life. This secret impedes a gorgeous woman from having happiness in her childhood, and throughout her life. Dark sec
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Deborah
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Kathy
Hugs,
Anna
Your gifted pen writes of dark and happy moments...that is why you are a good poet. Enjoyed~
Blessings,
~Linda
Be always safe,
Karen
Love ya face Cuz Hugs, XOXOXO Rose
Keep 'em coming.
Don't forget, DEMONS OF JUSTICE is available through Amazon at this time just in case your are interested. I can send a copy for $12 if you are interested. Amazon's price is much higher.
rege
Hugs,
Chrissie
Sheila
powerful, Felix ...
Blessings,
Christine
This poem involves age-old theories and dark secrets, which, also in my opinion, have yet to be answered, but we need to keep asking them nonetheless.
Dark chords leave room for resolution.
Feel better- but no need to write better.
Well done,
John