for someone special who is and always will be dear to my heart...
Just A Ghost
You’ll see me in the moon at night
glimpse me in a shooting star
smiling from a passing cloud
You’ll sense me in an autumn breeze
a breaking wave on a beach
perhaps a face in the crowd
You’ll touch my tears on your pillow
the whisper of a weeping willow
a red rose in a flower cart
You’ll crave my love again someday
like a lost truth for your soul
something missing in your heart
I’ll be in the wings just out of sight
a ghost doing what I have to do
Time is all that I have left now, time
Aye Felix, it's Christine Tsen review that fits my appraisal dear friend of this beautiful poem, "truly noble", strikes the chord that rings true to my ears --- I bid you joy, love and peace -- Jon Michael
Sometimes the memory is all we have to hold onto. The love is keenly felt, as is the longing for one missed so deeply within the heart. Beautiful and touching write, Fee. ~Elizabeth
BITTER SWEET...BEAUTIFUL THOUGHTS ABOUT WHAT WAS, BUT IS...NO MORE. THERE IS A ESSENCE ABOUT THIS WORK THAT 'LINGERS' WELL AFTER READING THE LAST WORD. WELL DONE AND THANKS FOR SHARING THIS KEEPER. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Just when I start to think all the great poems have already been written, you come along with this one. WOW!! It’s fantastic, Fee. Even the dedication was well said and it most certainly set up the poem perfectly.
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kathy
It is beautiful.
:) Janna
Hugs,
Anna
Sheila
what a Great love story!
Lady Vivian
Always,
Deborah
Chip Bergeron
Blessings,
Christine
Hugs,
Chrissie
Bravo. Thanks Dick
Love ya face Cuz Hugs XOXOXO, Rose