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Angel´s Voice
by Maria Cristina Azcona → (All Poetry by Maria Cristina Azcona)
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*Unpredictable mistery of wings* *disrupt sorrowful darkness.* *Slowly a butterfly trembles* *while moonlight begins a dance.* *Today, the Heyday of angels in advance,* *give us an admonitory command.* *Humanhood´s selfishness must end at once.* *Unbeleivable sense of a third dimension* *grows inside the thoughts of freedom.* *A voice, lovely and caressing sound,* *demands attention while a golden feather* *floates and reaches depths.* *Finally an awareness of the Lord* *fills the empty edifice of soul.* *Internal wisdom is increasing.* *Compassion is the way…* *the subway,the trainway...the wheels,* *the wheels of compassion.* *Now, everybody listens again to their old internal* Angel´s voice. copyright MCAZCONA 2002......................................................................................................................................My poem ANGEL´S VOICE is going to appear atthe "GOLDEN WINGS " a book from radha Agrawal(www.cyberwit.net) INDIA

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 1, 2003

Beautiful indeed!

May Lu $*_*$ a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Nice write Christina !

Reviewed by Mary Deal

Reviewed on January 15, 2003

A metaphorical way of looking within.

Reviewed by Veto

Reviewed on November 20, 2002

Great,I hear theit voices. write on,write on.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2002

Good poem in spite of so many misspellings. I would combine the two first short stanzas into one to keep to a better form. Lovely picture to go with it. ~E

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on June 2, 2002

Beautiful piece of poetry. Even though English is a second language for you. You did well.

I wonder if the word "Mistery" was a mistake, I couldn't figure it out.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Great Imagery Maria. We all should stop more often to listen to the Angels Voices.
Love and Light;
dreamweaver