Richard Cedeberg commented about a line in my "Acronym of me" that it could be a poem out of it.
And it provoked that mythical creature inside of me...
To Richard Cedeberg which was asking for it
Looking out from a very old window
dolphins dancing on the ocean I saw
like brothers coming back from afar
telling me that inside I was long enough,
to fly if I had those wings of freedom
and no chains holding me jailed at home,
because I was supposed to be a wanderer
walking with legs made of strange words,
a mythical creature like in Shatara dreams
guiding us to a unfathomable magic world,
a macrocosm of exquisite nectar kisses and
where poets are revered like gods of love,
suddenly, rain used its wets fingers on the
glass pane interrupting my reveries thoughts
as the waves out there dressed in white lace,
virgins coming to its wedding by the shore,
caressed by the warmth wind of promises
from a liar lover that came and now is gone,
and I went outside, where liquid mountains
are battering against an ocean made of rocks
where ethereal dolphins would go on flying
in an sky that isn’t above but on the floor,
with psychedelic colors from other planets
and divine sunsets of a green spreading sun;
cross roads everywhere, opening oddments
to get on wandering with legs made of words,
through landscapes never seen by any man
and no guide will take him there, not before
he will follow his brothers the flying dolphins
to immortality on a mythical wandering world.
a finely detailed dreamscape of phantasmagoric imagery ... your thoughts wander through space and time , from within the winds of unbound imagination arriving within an illuminating mythical world ...
Exceptional thoughts, with a kind of euphoric ambit, rich with grand imagery, born from the heart of an Olympian.
"walking with legs made of strange words," Powerful image! Edvard, this line gave me goose flesh. The imagery of this whole construct is quite Daliesque, and the more one (me) meditates on it the more energizing and kinetic it becomes.
Hi WE, You roam around in this write, but outside the word, too! He's a wanderer because wanderers are searchers, and sometimes they don't know they've found what they were searching for until in another life. Great write, Chief! But I know it's not just writing... :]
Georg, Such eloquent words you have penned. I love the mystical flow of this poem, it's visuals and richness captivates me.
One of your best my friend.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
I thought you were the "good" brother and here I come to find out that you had acid trips, like the one in the fourth paragraph...I've been there to that very spot...Ed & Rufuz [w00f]
What eloquent words you pen, Georg! My, my, my, my, my!! Wonderful writing as always, you always leave me begging for more! EXCELLENT, sir, just simply grand!! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
"Crossroads everywhere, opening oddments to get on wandering with legs made of words..." such is the fate of us who choose this consuming passion of the pen, our mythical partner. Wonderful poem as always, Georg.
THIS POEM WILL LIVE CENTURY AFTER CENTURY!!!!!!!!!!! Now I'm reading poets from 18th century. Those poets could just dream about GEORG MATEOS's TALENT!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
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Danielle enters a baking contest that the Rainbow Dream Trains are hosting to impress a small UN counsel that is coming to the Castle of Imagination. But things quickly go wrong, for a very dark reason.
will love this lines as do I:
and I went outside, where liquid mountains
are battering against an ocean made of rocks
-gene.
wonderment of your words! Thank you for blessing us with your gift!
love,
tiger lily
Regis
fee
Christine
"walking with legs made of strange words," Powerful image! Edvard, this line gave me goose flesh. The imagery of this whole construct is quite Daliesque, and the more one (me) meditates on it the more energizing and kinetic it becomes.
Blessings ...
rlc
all the best
Tuchy
I love this one, very well done. That fourth verse is my favorite!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
In Spirit,
Bear
All the best! Jasmin Horst
One of your best my friend.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
PS: unlike P-wee, I won't tell ma...
Walt
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Cynthia
We must do what destiny demands; quite a poem and quite an ending, brother.