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Because you merge within me....

by Richard Lloyd Cederberg — Read all 280 poems by Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Another look at true love. For MEC.
5-7-5-7-7

Thursday, August 24, 2017


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You flow into me
Without changing the essence
Of what I’ve become;
But I am more than I am
Because you merge within me
.
And as you mingle
Your soul and thinking with mine,
Our lives are heightened
By the blending of goodness
In our confluence of trust
.
We are swift to know-
As we coalesce as one-
This strength of knowing;
The wonders of two lives fixed
Together without doubting
.
Your heartstrings are mine,
And I will not betray them
With phony logic
Swashing a form of wisdom
Or the serpents beguiling
.
And in those moments
When two forces become one,
This hope enfolded,
Will be our flowing brushstrokes
And a love that reveals how
.
You flow into me
Without changing the essence
Of whom I’ve become;
But I am more than I am
Because you merge within me
.
richard lloyd cederberg
8/17


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Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on August 27, 2017
Every time you write of this subject, you arrest in my my own appreciation for love that is real. The flow, the merge, all mega-elements, that without them, far too many people are just passing by. Enjoyed this.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 25, 2017
POWERFUL AND ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL! I CAN RELATE, AMEN. RICHARD, THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR HEART...ABOUT YOUR HEART. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 25, 2017
Fortunately, I too, know the feeling of someone I merge with without fear or doubt. Not only is it a well-written poem, you have shown us the way that two people can make life better than both acting independently. It's really wonderful when we've found that really significant other.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 24, 2017
A well wrought and disciplined tanka form poem anointing the concept of true love. Excellent. John

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 24, 2017
I would think that by now you would be far into yourself with no more self-seeking necessary on your part...a hell of alot further into the self than I am at any rate...-e-

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on August 24, 2017
"Your heart-strings are mine,
And I will not betray them
With phony logic
Swashing a form of wisdom
Or the serpents beguiling"

Perfect. Somehow when we get to that point there is nothing left to say except, I love you with honesty which is irreproachable.

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on August 24, 2017
I love the repeat line "you flow into me" no better way to penetrate then with the inflow of water. Water is light and weightless but given enough weight it can do so much. I love your poetry Richard, it speaks volumes of the poet inside. May you be anointed with a blessed day, and many more joyful love filled tomorrows. xo

Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on August 24, 2017
Beautiful. Love flows into one like the rush of the falls as it makes it way down the mountain. Idealistic but beautiful. I can't help it. I'm a cynic but a romantic at heart.


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