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The First Snow
by Ronald W. Hull → (All Poetry by Ronald W. Hull)
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A composite of childhood snow memories…

Mom and her goat, circa 1932.


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The First Snow

After a warm day of muddy play,
we'd feel the chill on our arms.
Time to head for the house,
to the smell of cooking charms.

We put more wood on the fire,
as wisps of the front would warn.
Gramps felt it in his bones,
"It's gonna to be a nasty storm."

First rain, and then, sleet, fell,
Dad came home wet, with icy tears.
"Glad I got off early tonight, my dears.
Haven't seen one this bad in years."

We would watch by the window,
feeling a cold draft leak through.
As the sleet turned to snow in the yard light,
and our world turned from old to new.

The magic of swirling snowflakes,
would set our minds adrift.
Magic castles in the sky,
with images of move and shift.

The vertigo of watching,
would make us mesmerized.
But soon our lids were drooping,
time to close our eyes.

Mom tucked us in our beds,
and we said our nightly prayer.
As soon as she had left the room,
we'd sneak to the window to stare.

The howling of the wind outside,
and swirling of the snow.
Watching snowdrifts building,
made our young hearts glow.

Suddenly, it was morning,
as sunlight brightly churned.
Seemed warmer than it really was,
the smell of bacon yearned.

We rushed to the back door,
and tried to open it up.
But snow was firm behind it,
and Mom shouted, "Eat up."

We wolfed down our oatmeal,
couldn't wait to get outside.
Hoping that our dog was safe,
and not buried in his hide.

Underwear, socks, shirts and pants,
sweaters over head, snow pants, yoe!
Scarves, muffs, mittens, coats and boots,
we were cocoons from top to toe.

Dad opened a window,
and we crawled out.
sunk halfway to our waists,
with a happy shout.

Crawling on our hands and knees,
we finally reached the shed.
Dug down to find good old Red.
Wagged his tail while we rubbed his head

All day Dad spent shoveling out the drive,
but we were in heaven, so glad to be alive.
We worked our magic with the snow,
made forts and caves that thrived.

Built a snowman midst snowball fights,
and made angels in the snow.
But time was short and the day waned.
In the west, the last Sun's glow.

With rosy cheeks and tingling feet,
we brushed off a day of packed snow.
Mom said, "Let's eat before it's cold."
And we sat down for a memory show.

For visions rose up in our heads,
as we ate our fill and finally, you know.
Went off to bed deep in thoughts,
with dreams of fun from our first snow.

Copyright 2008 © Ronald W. Hull

12/13/08


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 Reviews of "The First Snow"
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on December 15, 2008
I miss those days, man...I once built an igloo in the snow, with a smoke stack for the cigarettes I'd sneak! LOL!
We would try getting up early to get first dibs on the snow mobile...eleven to one! I was usually seen riding through the fields, barefoot and in my pajamas...not feeling a thing! HA!
My nana's armpits remedied our cold hands! Ewe!
Loved the pen!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on December 15, 2008
What a delightful bunch of memories you have stirred in me. Thank you so very much.
Blessings J'nia

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
encapsulates a wonderful snowy day ... nice!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
We got snow here this morning, but it didn't stick as the ground is not frozen...but, it brings memories of past snowy days, the air, oxygen rich, the snap of the cold and the quiet beauty that only comes with a good deep snow. Your words are magical, Ron. Thank you for sharing a bit of your childhood with us all.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
...wonderful detail in this poetic verse Ron...visual images to capture the heart...and warm memories that return.
thanks for sharing this enjoyable write...
John

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
wasn't it just wonderful, that first big snow? -- the world was transformed into a regal, alabaster palace -- I was right there beside you through every event Ron -- you told this wonderful memory with great passion and clarity -- I like your mom's goat -- peace and love to you my friend -- JMW

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Man! You had a childhood just like mine! I'm sorta jealous of this poem. You really are a pro - this exactly captures it, and so thoroughly (I grew up on Long Island) This should be in every magazine this Christmas. How about sending it somewhere? So many, perfect childhood images. This was the most memorable for me: "We would watch by the window,
feeling a cold draft leak through.
As the sleet turned to snow in the yard light,
and our world turned from old to new."
Gotta hand it to you... Mr. SnowMan

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
WOW, just over night and you couldn't open the door, that would be something to see...maybe if the door opened inward, you could dig from there...enjoyed this memory, thanks, Ed


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