Seals of Fate (poem) by Ronald W. Hull on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 5, 2012

This really delivers food for thought. In a world full of injustice and suffering, the courage of right over wrong is still visible.

Reviewed by D.E.Z. Butler

Reviewed on February 15, 2012

I see the power of the sword through your eyes. Thank you for your thoughts about my poem. You encourage and that is a sword for me, for inspiration.

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on February 7, 2012

this prompts many thoughts. nice write. ~ Morgan

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on February 4, 2012

Electrifyingly wonderfully written!

Reviewed by Layla Thomas

Reviewed on February 1, 2012

my sister is a chief in the Navy

excellent write!

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on January 30, 2012

WE HAVE SO MUCH AND SO MANY TO BE THANKFUL FOR...WE HAVE SO MUCH AND SO MANY...TO PRAY FOR. THANKS FOR SHARING, RONALD AND BLESSINGS. LOVE & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 30, 2012

Like a mantra and the repetitions and internal rhymes with strong "s"-sounds are hypnotic. Very strong marching beat, too. Almost like the ticking of a clock. I think rappers would also like this one! Yep, Ron; like it or not, time, tide and "fate" do not falter in their steady progression upon us. Like the lull before the storm. xx

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on January 30, 2012

Great testament to the courage and strength of those who stand before us in harms way....Well done, Ronald! Neat style!

Anna

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 29, 2012

...the Navy seals deserve all the compliments they can get...this one is a great one...e

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on January 28, 2012

It worked out well, like this poem. I hope the pirates get the message. Patrick

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2012

Your poetry sells the seals, and it's no soft-sell. Well done, Ronald. As you final couplet suggests the proof is in the authenticity of the pudding, and not to put too fine a point on it, that's putting it mildly.

Be well and at peace with all.

Roger

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 28, 2012

Love over hatred, peace over war, joy over sorrow, right over wrong, life over death... ...your verses elicit much thinking within me, Ron. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd

Reviewed on January 28, 2012

Good sharp poem, Ron. You sound a deternmined, talented, brave man to overcome your difficulties and achieve what you have. Thanks for reading my poem.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on January 28, 2012

Ronald,
Seals of Fate is just great.
Budd

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 28, 2012

Captues the essence of the Seals quite coherently ...

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on January 28, 2012

"...For right is might, and wrong is wrong. And as long as we can sing this song, right will win over wrong..." You sure about that, Ron? Hope you're right, cause we've sure got a lot of wrongs to get righted. Good stuff, this.

Nice job, Dick

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on January 28, 2012

Truly a meaningful poem well done indeed Laura

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on January 28, 2012

Ron,

Very interesting with so much meaning.

Mary

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on January 28, 2012

Wonderfully constructed and I love the compliment to the Navy Seals. Very good, Ron.