Loved the play on the word relish. My favorite addition to hotdogs and hamburgers.
Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2003
upon opening the "new poem" site I was immediately overjoyed just knowing you did in fact right the poem.. and then claiming I "made you do it again' oh I was really smiling then haha
You did a wonderful wonderful job with this one.. it was much enjoyed and you hit on a few personal thoughts as well which made all the merrier for me...
of course, I don't like relish on my dog but in a sandwhich maybe.. depends though
relish...very seductive now that you've given us a wordsmith's eye on the word.
Smile.
Susan
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
Ahhhh, Ron.. this is one of the most delightful, playful, sweet poems anywhere! You've 'smothered' some important commentary with an infectious rhyme.. my toes were taping.. my face is grinning. Truly cool! katy.
We Will Stone Him is a raw, unfiltered trauma memoir about surviving childhood abuse, emotional manipulation, and the lifelong wounds that follow. This true story marks the beginning of the Rising From The Ashes Trilogy, John Gambacorta and his survi
She never felt safe at home as a young girl, and didn't understand why when she finally escaped she wasn't safe in the big wide world either ...effectively jumping out of the frying pan into the fire!
You did a wonderful wonderful job with this one.. it was much enjoyed and you hit on a few personal thoughts as well which made all the merrier for me...
of course, I don't like relish on my dog but in a sandwhich maybe.. depends though
Smile.
Susan