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Coal Miner's Commute
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To a coal miner's family, Daddy was a hard-working man with calloused hands. He called Mom "the old lady," carried a lunch bucket and canteen to work, and wore a hat with a light on the front. Times were tough, but so was the miner.


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"Make it your ambition to lead a quiet life,
to mind your own business
and to work with your own hands,
just as we told you,
so that your daily life
may win the respect of outsiders
and so that you will not be
dependant on anybody."

~ St. Paul, in a letter to the church of Thessalonica (NIV Bible)


Coal Miner's Commute

Turning on the spigot with
a calloused hand,
he watched the crystal water
trickle
into his dented canteen.
As he screwed on the rusty lid,
his blue eyes traveled
the room,
loathe to depart
the warm, familiar scene.

His old lady had packed his bucket,
spreading the sandwiches thin . . .
a slice of minced ham,
smears of mustard
and colored butterine.
she had the coffee ready
in the dripolator pot;
He only needed to stir the coals
to get the fire
good and hot.

She and the kids would be waking
'bout the time he trudged
down the road.
The colliery wasn't so far away, but
he'd carry
a heavy load
.

Seemed every day got harder
as he stepped out in the dark,
leaving all he cared about behind . . .
Well, no sense dwelling on it,
there was no other work.
With one last swig
of coffee,
he set out for the mine . . .
He set out for his job
in the black heart
of the mine.

 

(c) Connie Faust

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Coal Miner's Commute"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 10, 2019
WOW...THIS IS TOUCHING WORK HERE, CONNIE. INDEED...FATHERS WERE AND STILL ARE SO IMPORTANT IN THE 'KEEPING' OF FAMILY. THEY ARE AN INSPIRATION THAT LASTS FOR ALL OUR YEARS. ENJOYED AND THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on August 22, 2018
The mine was a scary place. It ate men for breakfast.

Reviewed on December 22, 2016
Love it! Can picture this scene vividly! Great job!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 4, 2014
This is very well done, Connie; and it is a fine and meaningful tribute. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Susan Smith
Reviewed on June 22, 2014
I can so relate. My father was a coal miner at one time.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 13, 2014
Very personal and realistic, showing a way of life that endured for so long but is now fading away as deep mining for coal gives way to strip mining and mountain topping. It wore even the strongest man down just trying to provide for his family.

Ron

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on June 13, 2014
wonderful words easily laid out to create a story through poetry. loved it.

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on June 13, 2014
...wonderful wording to vivify the endless
routine...hard work with a few escapes...and
constant ignoring the daily danger.
Thank you Connie, for sharing your truly poetic
family tale. Blessings!

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on June 12, 2014
Connie, this is a masterpiece! I could picture being in the mine and have a new appreciation for the hardships they faced. Very descriptive poetry. Nice work Connie!

Peace, love and blessings,

John Michael

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 12, 2014
You sure created a profound composition. Wonderful Connie! Blessings, Christine

Reviewed on June 12, 2014
It's a dangerous job. I think most would live each day as it is their last day, and time - a gift from God.

Good write!

Sandie


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