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Thinking about Space
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Most of us learn, from birth that we have to be good to go to heaven; but how good do we need to be before we live in the heavens?


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Thinking about Space

One day we’ll live on the moon,

One day we’ll go to Mars.

We’ll own the universe soon,

We’ll live among the stars.

 

We might even start anew,

Our brains are growing stronger.

The children of me and you,

Are thinking and living longer.

 

Will mankind ever grow,

Brilliant, intelligent and wise?

Because heaven should know,

Peace

Out there in the fresh new skies.

 

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 Reviews of "Thinking about Space"
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
A beauty of a write...awesome!
Love always
from
kay

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 2, 2007
Will mankind ever grow,
Brilliant, intelligent and wise?
Because heaven should know,
Peace
Out there in the fresh new skies.

My question and sentiments exactly, Joyce. There is substance for thought in your verses. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
Some actually think we may have to move out there somewhere in the fresh new skies after we completely ruin this planet.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
A well written and refreshing piece pondering the future and what might yet be......

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by William Manchee
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
Interesting thoughts. Unfortunately in the past when we've struck out into new frontiers we've left civilization behind and reverted to our animal instincts. Maybe that won't happen in outer space, I hope not.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
We have to pray for Wisdom and the first step is to admit how stupid we are. I guess that eliminates 3/4 of the world who will not admit that.

Reviewed by Silent Dream
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
I like this and the question it poses. Nicely done!

((Hugs and LOve)) ~SilentDream

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
All that is true. But I don't hold much hope for mankind. We keep making the same mistakes. Enjoyed reading.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
Wish I knew the answer. Nice write. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Lewis Findley (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
Earth is the cradle of mankind, but it is illogical fo rman to stay in his cradle forever , author unkonwn, well penned Joyce. Donny

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
The heavens are beautiful, and one day the almighty shall turn its darkness to light. Enjoyed


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