His Ness of Sublime" (poem) by Kimmy Van Kooten on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Chris Fitzgerald (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2006

a true poet who attract her reader. Full of delight and expression.
I for one do love your work. This is a true keeper for the book.
Chrissy

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on December 1, 2006

Kimmy ...

This is one of the most refreshingly unique constructs that I've read in a long while. The way that you play with phonetics and sound shapes is unequaled.

Truly you are connected to spirit in powerful ways. Brava! Never rest your quill Poet!

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on December 1, 2006

Kimmy so much wisdom and beauty in these verses.
"Peace can’t occur,
in a vault of vacuity
Know how to go,
in your worlds of obscurity"
AMEN!

Thank you peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2006

Brilliant your use with words. Peace within ourselves makes peace outside too... Most intelligent poem...

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on November 30, 2006

His Ness of Sublime does NOT have to fit any matrix (form). It is "quiesce" as in unagitated and placid. This poem is anything BUT vacuous, not lacking expression or intelligence. Kimmy is one who plays with the syntax of wording for gain of readership to those who have as playful and spiritual of a nature reading her poems as she does quilling them...I, for one, appreciate the different spellings and personal offshoots of original words that an author tailor scribes for their opus. OUTSTANDING composition, Kimmy...

Sage

Reviewed by Jim Moore (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2006

Kimmy, this is interesting. I'm not quite sure I'm familiar with "quiesce" as a known word, though. At least I couldn't find in encarta. And I don't believe the word "earring" was used correctly either. You might want to consult a thesaurus to give you some ideas on other words that might fit better than that one. Just some friendly advice.

Best,

Jim

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on November 30, 2006

Kimmy, this is so different -- I think they call it "poetic license" when a poet invents newness within their work. Very clever!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on November 30, 2006

The poem is rife with unusual phrases, which is good, but the 'ness of sublime' is particularly imaginative and unique.
Rusty

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 30, 2006

You are unique in your use of words that puts life in your poems.