I sit here and
All I can smell
Is ripe bananas
Should I get up
And do something
With them
Or just let
The ripe things be
I need to go
Up and use
The bathroom
But I just sit here
And constipate me
Which way is what
The sit downs
Or the take a stands
I want to be
Proactive
But won't get
Off my lazy can
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Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Yeah, make nanner bread for sure.
Nats love old nanners?
So your doing the can can thing?
Lurve ya!
I'm thinking Lynn, when those babies get a little darker, it will be them in the can. lol Being one to over analyze things I see a great metaphor for seeing a problem and not decideing to do something about it. Nifty little write Lynn.
Rusty
Homer's Ill Iliad & Odd Sea Odyssey (420 pages) is an adult satire/parody rewrite of the classic stories of the 10 year Trojan War and of the 10 year adventure of Odysseus trying to return home to his native Ithaca.
Nats love old nanners?
So your doing the can can thing?
Lurve ya!
Love,
CJ
Rusty