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Rectangle box..........
by Karen Palumbo → (All Poetry by Karen Palumbo)
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                                    Rectangle box.........

 

                     A rectangle box rests,
               in a corner of the basement.
                Black case, brown straps,
       covered in dust on a block of cement.


     Where it traveled, stickers were placed,
         not a new box, an old one for sure.
  New York, California, Montana and Texas,
             was this box away on a tour?


      Curiosity overwhelming, need to know,
         what is inside, a treasure, a toy?
    Untying the straps, slowly open the box,
       two big eyes looking up, a little boy.


      Checkerboard suit, flower in the lapel,
      legs folded up, arms tucked at his side.
      He had red lips with a great big smile,
   picked him up gently, held him with pride.


       Red curly hair and a tall black hat,
       purple socks and large orange shoes.
     Started to giggle, my tears went away,
  he made me feel happy, took away my blues.


       Clear thin strings all tied up in knots,
 were strewn all about, a spider's web I said.
        Tugging, pulling, cutting the strings,
 beginning with his shoes way up to his head.


       Attached the string to both his hands,
        did the same for his two funny feet.
In the rectangle box, found two crossed sticks,
    string wound was placed nice and neat.


   Glad I opened that box all covered in dust,
     with my new puppet friend, we can play.
     The weather outside is windy with rain,
     lots to do now, we can have fun all day.


 

 

Written by:
Karen Palumbo
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6/1/2007
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 Reviews of "Rectangle box.........."
Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on October 30, 2007
We all have memories of mysterious corners of our homes, of boxes o shelves out of reach...

A vivid description that works as a metaphor of discovery and renewal.

Kind regards,

Axilea

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on September 7, 2007
Great read Karen...describing something locked within...resurfacing...and given new life...a friend.
Well done...
John

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on June 7, 2007
I can see this ! A box covered with dust, am glad you took time to look inside! What you found was a delight...M

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on June 5, 2007
Wow that box, it's it's not a box LOL.
A most enjoyable read, arent kids fab to do things with.

TY for this gem
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on June 4, 2007
Working with children gave me an excuse to play with puppets. What a blast we all had!! You have done a wonderful job of putting us beside you. Idea's inspired!! T h a n k s !! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on June 4, 2007
This is great I truly enjoyed reading~`*

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on June 4, 2007
With all those stickers
He must have had lots of stories
He was waiting to tell
Dance and sing
Among other things
Your puppet on a string.
Enjoyed
DWB

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
This was really nice. I have a carnival buzzard myself. Lady J

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
This is delightful, Karen... unique and intriguing. I ALWAYS wanted a proper puppet on strings, but never progressed beyond the glove puppets. This is wonderfully described and injects real life into this blossoming friendship. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
This is a very nice write
And a great surprise to you
Finding a puppet,I love basement you never know
What kind of things are there!!
Excellent imagery and flow my friend
Enjoyed reading this great write!1
Love And Peace To you always
Your friend...Morning Star

Reviewed by Theresa curnow (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
This is lovely and takes me back to my childhood where I used to own a puppet very similiar. You have portrayed a childs curiosity very well. I enjoyed this a lot, love Theresa.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
ah, how the mysteries within a box can motivate our strings ...

vivid imagery ... fun write ...

Reviewed by Karen Cino
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
The imagery in Rectangle Box is absolutely Outstanding. We all have a box like this stashed some place in our houses. You are giving me the itch to go and pull it out. WOnderful write.

~hugs~
Karen

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
You painted a marvelous and feel-good picture.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
I love puppets, always did as a kid.
My grandchildren love me to play the
clown for them with one of those
puppet gloves. Is that what you call
em. Not sure ;) Never know what you'll
find in a "rectangle box"

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Awwwww you got me for a while.....but then realized the boy was a puppet on a string!!

Thanks for sharing!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
I was immediatley reminded of the old Charley McCarthy dummy we had in our house, back when we were kids...you awoke a long time memory, thanks,

Dan

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Karen, this was terrific! At first I thought it was a forgotten teddy-bear...I love teddies. Sometimes we put things away for safe-keeping only to forget...until years later when we accidentally stumble upon a suspicious box tucked away in a long-forgotten cubbyhole. Do you think we should start making notes of where we store things? I wonder? Great write...engaging...

God Bless
Much love
Lena

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Great story unfolds before the readers eyes, I love finding treasures in unexpected places. My imagination runs wild when I find a box, trunk, or something that may contain unknown treasure. I teach a lesson on a box with my students, each year they love it...I bring in a curious looking box and leave it where the children can see it, but not the contents. I leave it there for most of the day, and I have left it for two days. When the time is just right, I tell a story of how I found a box when I was a young girl, how my imagination soared...I then go on to ask each student what the box might contain, the answers are wonderful...when I reveal the contents of the box, they are amazed...it's nothing but an opening for them to exercise their imagination. They can turn the box into anything they want, a racecar, a bus, a clubhouse, the possibilities are endless...I give each child their own box, usually a box that copy paper was packed in, they are just the right size and sturdy. It is amazing to watch them go to work coloring and their imaginations run wild! It's a great lesson, just as this write is fantastic. I would love to use this poem in my class, may I borrow it for the upcoming year to introduce my lesson with? Enjoyed this so very much.
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Great story here, the mystery in the rectangle box, and then the wonderful find! Well done.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Beautiful write, my friend; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D

Got the books; thanks! :)

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Karen, joy found hiding in the rectangle box...this could make a good kids story. Many things to ponder here: Where had he been? Who owned him? Did he have a name, What's his age? etc.? The images in this writing are great...spilling out beautiful colors and mysteries.

Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Karen,

What pleasure in the simple things: who needs all of the complicated toys? The things we find in the attic (or basements) are the stuff memories are made of. Kids nowadays don't use their imaginations anymore, and it's sad.......anyway, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Henry Lefevre
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
That's a cute little poem. It reminds me of the foibles of Charlie McCarthy. He and Edgar put on a good show.

Hank

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
"Rectangle Box", and its contents, remind us how much joy can be found in the simple little treasures we gather about us.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
A most captivating piece, Karen. Old trunks often reveal many a treasure.

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Karen,
Very picturesque and the description of your little "puppet man" are marvelous. I enjoyed this poem; so glad you shared.

George

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
So is that where I came from... HA, so the Stalk is a lie?
Delightful poem...

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2007
I almost wish I'd found him..
Delightful write Karen...

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 1, 2007
Great imagery in this heart tugging write on finding a puppet friend.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 1, 2007
You painted a picture in vivid hues with your words Karen! I felt like I was the one finding the treasure!;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on June 1, 2007
Wonderful write...Could almost smell the musty basement...I must be running slow today 'cause it took me a while to figure out it was a marionette..duh! Enjoyed this Karen!!

Edwin


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