A rectangle box rests,
in a corner of the basement.
Black case, brown straps,
covered in dust on a block of cement.
Where it traveled, stickers were placed,
not a new box, an old one for sure.
New York, California, Montana and Texas,
was this box away on a tour?
Curiosity overwhelming, need to know,
what is inside, a treasure, a toy?
Untying the straps, slowly open the box,
two big eyes looking up, a little boy.
Checkerboard suit, flower in the lapel,
legs folded up, arms tucked at his side.
He had red lips with a great big smile,
picked him up gently, held him with pride.
Red curly hair and a tall black hat,
purple socks and large orange shoes.
Started to giggle, my tears went away,
he made me feel happy, took away my blues.
Clear thin strings all tied up in knots,
were strewn all about, a spider's web I said.
Tugging, pulling, cutting the strings,
beginning with his shoes way up to his head.
Attached the string to both his hands,
did the same for his two funny feet.
In the rectangle box, found two crossed sticks,
string wound was placed nice and neat.
Glad I opened that box all covered in dust,
with my new puppet friend, we can play.
The weather outside is windy with rain,
lots to do now, we can have fun all day.
Working with children gave me an excuse to play with puppets. What a blast we all had!! You have done a wonderful job of putting us beside you. Idea's inspired!! T h a n k s !! 'Pea' <3
This is delightful, Karen... unique and intriguing. I ALWAYS wanted a proper puppet on strings, but never progressed beyond the glove puppets. This is wonderfully described and injects real life into this blossoming friendship. TY Kate xx
This is a very nice write
And a great surprise to you
Finding a puppet,I love basement you never know
What kind of things are there!!
Excellent imagery and flow my friend
Enjoyed reading this great write!1
Love And Peace To you always
Your friend...Morning Star
Reviewed by Theresa curnow (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
This is lovely and takes me back to my childhood where I used to own a puppet very similiar. You have portrayed a childs curiosity very well. I enjoyed this a lot, love Theresa.
The imagery in Rectangle Box is absolutely Outstanding. We all have a box like this stashed some place in our houses. You are giving me the itch to go and pull it out. WOnderful write.
I love puppets, always did as a kid.
My grandchildren love me to play the
clown for them with one of those
puppet gloves. Is that what you call
em. Not sure ;) Never know what you'll
find in a "rectangle box"
Karen, this was terrific! At first I thought it was a forgotten teddy-bear...I love teddies. Sometimes we put things away for safe-keeping only to forget...until years later when we accidentally stumble upon a suspicious box tucked away in a long-forgotten cubbyhole. Do you think we should start making notes of where we store things? I wonder? Great write...engaging...
Great story unfolds before the readers eyes, I love finding treasures in unexpected places. My imagination runs wild when I find a box, trunk, or something that may contain unknown treasure. I teach a lesson on a box with my students, each year they love it...I bring in a curious looking box and leave it where the children can see it, but not the contents. I leave it there for most of the day, and I have left it for two days. When the time is just right, I tell a story of how I found a box when I was a young girl, how my imagination soared...I then go on to ask each student what the box might contain, the answers are wonderful...when I reveal the contents of the box, they are amazed...it's nothing but an opening for them to exercise their imagination. They can turn the box into anything they want, a racecar, a bus, a clubhouse, the possibilities are endless...I give each child their own box, usually a box that copy paper was packed in, they are just the right size and sturdy. It is amazing to watch them go to work coloring and their imaginations run wild! It's a great lesson, just as this write is fantastic. I would love to use this poem in my class, may I borrow it for the upcoming year to introduce my lesson with? Enjoyed this so very much.
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Great story here, the mystery in the rectangle box, and then the wonderful find! Well done.
Hugs, Laura
Karen, joy found hiding in the rectangle box...this could make a good kids story. Many things to ponder here: Where had he been? Who owned him? Did he have a name, What's his age? etc.? The images in this writing are great...spilling out beautiful colors and mysteries.
What pleasure in the simple things: who needs all of the complicated toys? The things we find in the attic (or basements) are the stuff memories are made of. Kids nowadays don't use their imaginations anymore, and it's sad.......anyway, well done!
Wonderful write...Could almost smell the musty basement...I must be running slow today 'cause it took me a while to figure out it was a marionette..duh! Enjoyed this Karen!!
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Kind regards,
Axilea
Well done...
John
A most enjoyable read, arent kids fab to do things with.
TY for this gem
Ch'erie
He must have had lots of stories
He was waiting to tell
Dance and sing
Among other things
Your puppet on a string.
Enjoyed
DWB
And a great surprise to you
Finding a puppet,I love basement you never know
What kind of things are there!!
Excellent imagery and flow my friend
Enjoyed reading this great write!1
Love And Peace To you always
Your friend...Morning Star
vivid imagery ... fun write ...
~hugs~
Karen
My grandchildren love me to play the
clown for them with one of those
puppet gloves. Is that what you call
em. Not sure ;) Never know what you'll
find in a "rectangle box"
Thanks for sharing!!
Love Tinka
Dan
God Bless
Much love
Lena
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Hugs, Laura
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D
Got the books; thanks! :)
What pleasure in the simple things: who needs all of the complicated toys? The things we find in the attic (or basements) are the stuff memories are made of. Kids nowadays don't use their imaginations anymore, and it's sad.......anyway, well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Hank
Very picturesque and the description of your little "puppet man" are marvelous. I enjoyed this poem; so glad you shared.
George
Delightful poem...
Delightful write Karen...
Love,
Eileen
Edwin