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Wandering Mind.....
by Karen Palumbo → (All Poetry by Karen Palumbo)
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               Wandering Mind.....


Late, late at night when all is quiet,
a chance to lie back, give your mind a rest.
Eyes slowly closing, afghan on lap,
time for a wandering mind to do its best.

Traveling back further and further,
hearing men marching to a steady beat.
Clay jugs of wine placed on carts,
underneath straw to protect from heat.

Nuts, berries, and grapes fill clay pottery,
along with the aroma of freshly baked bread.
Patrons file in through archway openings,
excited with anticipation of gloom and dread.

Powder blue sky above filled with giant clouds,
sun is strong with no shade to be found.
Men take their positions to raise the canopy,
while thousands of people are walking around.

Mixtures of sounds begin to crescendo,
with talking, laughter, children playing, crying.
Lions, tigers, horses, and bears,
do they even know they too will be dying.

First men to appear on the floor of this arena,
are warm up entertainers to gather attention.
Poetry readings, short plays, acrobats,
leading the audience into a different dimension.

Completely engrossed eating nuts and grapes,
bowls of berries and freshly baked bread.
All drinking wine under the hot sun,
how many more this day will be dead.

The arena clears and in a few moments,
out come the lions, tigers, and bears.
Criminals, innocents, young and old,
trumpeted in and no one sheds tears.

These are the martyrs being led to slaughter,
all for the sake of entertainment and fun.
Audience is clamoring for more and more,
all while drinking wine under a hot sun.

Hungry animals are no more,
the arena is cleared one last time.
The audience becomes completely silent,
as gladiators appear, each looking fine.

Each one trained in a specific specialty,
all well fed on pasta, beans, and meat.
Which brave warriors will live or die,
as the audience roars drunk with treat.

Late, late at night when all is quiet,
a chance to lie back, give your mind a rest.
Eyes slowly closing, afghan on lap,
time for a wandering mind to do its best.

 

 

Written by:
Karen Palumbo
Photography by:
Robert Palumbo
1/17/2010 © All rights reserved

 

 


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 Reviews of "Wandering Mind....."
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on February 27, 2010
Great images . Sometimes its hard to unwind and settle down . Well said!...M

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on February 26, 2010
WANDERING MIND...MUSING ON THE GOOD AND BAD...ALL IN ONE SETTING. WELL DONE WORK WITH GREAT IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 10, 2010
A most engaging write that lights up the imagination, Karen. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on February 7, 2010
Imaghinative and thought-provoking! "Bread and circuses" comes to mind. Gladiators parade, and I see lions pacing in sunken cages. Ray and I were lucky enough to get to Rome a few years back. Colisseum gave me shudders. Blood still there, you know. Bein' ghoulish? See what you started?;)

Give that fertile imagination of yours plenty of room. Feed it and pet it and take it out for spins. Got a gift, girl. Thank you so much letting us have a sample.

xOx 'Pea' xOx

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on February 6, 2010
Wow this is what you daydream about..quite a wild ride for your reader. Of course done in KP style with descriptive narratives and softness placed all around. You sure do have a wandering amazing mind!

Miss you, come back soon!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on February 2, 2010
This is a very powerful write Karen and quite an adventure!
A masterpiece "Wandering Mind..." Great picture too. Thanks
to both you and Robert!


Much Love,
Margaret

Reviewed on January 31, 2010
quite a wandering mind Karen, of course reality can be worse, Haiti for example, cheers

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on January 31, 2010
Was this tonights news? Excellent poem with history. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on January 27, 2010
A great edge-of-my-seat feel to this poem, Karen. And you capture history vividly here. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on January 21, 2010
Excellent poem.take care

Reviewed by kg cummings
Reviewed on January 21, 2010
that is a place my mind chooses to never wander! for all of it's faults, living in the present is dangerous enough for me! You have painted a very vivid picture with your words in a remarkable way. I can so love and relate to the afghan on my lap as the mind wanders to some safe sissy place! Hugs, kathy

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on January 20, 2010
Very good. Thank you for sharing this little treasure with us. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 19, 2010
Beautifully and masterfully done, Karen.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
Outstanding write....thank for taking us where your mind wanders!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
KP, I'll have double of what you had. WTG.
Better than any ride I've been on.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
Karen,
...and this is as far as we've come, the spectacle, the blood and gore still enchant and fascinate, and you have rendered it all marvellously without condemnation but not denying either. This is very fine indeed.

John

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
Coincidence as I was thinking only two days ago about the huge "gossip" and "reality" industry on tv and how it is similar to the spirit of those days. Take a jump forward and its not hard to envision something like this as entertainment(chills). You certainly know how to put us in the scene, Karen...Lin

Reviewed on January 18, 2010
and you surely do take us back in time Karen
also takes me to the Schaumburg Castle in Illinois
for Medievil Times
Armament's Knights & Maidens
Vickie

Reviewed on January 18, 2010
You take us back to another place and time, Karen, in effectively imaged lines: well done.

(((HUGS))) and love to you, Robert, and the kids, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
Wandering Mind, Back Through Time - most interesting.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
A classic tale, from bygone times, but then...aren't we doing the same using more "modern" methods? because we are also feeding like them of old from "...criminals, innocents, young and old..." Nobody can accuse us of discrimination!

Georg


Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
WONDERFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
Great write, Karen. Very well done indeed. God bless.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
Wow you certainly took me back in time and as I read I couldn't help think of the comparison of gladiators to our modern football players...so many similarities.
fee

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
You sure have written a classic in this wonderful poetry that has transported me back to the days of the Roman Empire where Christians were led to their death for their beliefs.

George

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
Modern Day History Repeating Itself,i.e. Modern Day Wars Instead Of Swords Its Guns/Rifles Assault Weapons, War Planes/Drones Weapons Of Destruction While Manufacturers ** Fondle In Its $GREED$ Making/Producing War Materials...

** While Molesting (SEXUAL ENJOYING) Raping,Killing Your Children Our Children...

Well Written Done Said From Gifted Historian Karen ...

TRASK

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
You know we're just "this" close to those barbaric days. Who's kidding who? Ultimate Fighting Championship is a tiny step away. All they need now is a spear. Patrick

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
whew, what a journey


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