Everything's right about "What's Wrong," a very delightful and enjoyable prose. Made me laugh and me cry; hope you find your beau. Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria
My holy. Thank you so much for your support. You have given me such a treasure, such a feed back - May every minute sing for you in silent. I know of course my English must be a bit clumsy, but what´s perfect in life? Thank you, thank you.
Funny and beautiful at the same time, Unnur! I am a big fan of snow and the scandinavian countries so this poem fell like a crystal into my lap. Best wishes kenny
Book 2 of The Commander and the Chief series finds the Chief "on the warpath" and "counting coup" with her enemies on both sides of the ocean. Meanwhile, she fights an indictment and risks losing her latest love, the Commander, as well as unleashing
i enjoyed the logic and concept of this poem ...
Susan
I like your poem,
good observations
keep looking.........maybe he is under that snow, and you will find him come the spring thaw
pax A
Wonderful write!!!!!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)