Senryu: I Miss You, Mom (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

I know what you mean, Karla, even though my mother is alive. I have an aunt that died when I was nine and I still feel her absence. A short yet powerful tribute. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on March 18, 2005

It Is Really Nice You Had Momma You Miss_

My Mother Somehow Gets Into My Dreams Obivously To Annoy Me--She's Always Has Me Over To Her House,But, Locks Me Out So I Can't Get Back In,i.e. My Mother Never Hugged Me In Lifetime Until Went Back Tow My Car Back To California_

When I Left She Huggged Me,Crying Knowing She Would Never See Me Again--Sad Huh!
She Died In May 1987 In PA-- Me, TRASK Lost My Home-I Was Sleeping On My Car In CA... Do I Miss Her-Hell No More Than My Bastard Father In Same...

YOU NOW UNDERSTAND: Even Life's Regrets Go On After Death,Family Parents Bothers Sisters ( My 2 Faced Sister To Her Grave; My Little Children Tell Me She Never Stops Crying-Thank (God) I Can't Hear Her ) Will Haunt You From Other Side Wishing They'd Never Done What They Did To You While They Were ALIVE---Living!

Your BODY IS ONLY Vehicle Carry's You Your Soul In This Physical World,i.e.Regrets,Pain,Anguish,Suffering Misery (NEGATIVE ENERGY)Even Carrys Over On After Your Death!

Your Friend,TRASK

PS: It Is Why I Tell EVERYBODY-- Now Make Your AMENDS 1st To Yourself,Then To All Others Esp.Those You Truly Care About...

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on March 17, 2005

I'm truly sorry Karla.
So beautifully and warmly written with your broken heart.
I'm very sorry Karla and Karen.
I send My love your way.
Tracey

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on March 17, 2005

The pic shows your feelings. I'm sorry for your heartache

Reviewed by Patrick McCormick

Reviewed on March 17, 2005

My condolences on your loss fifteen years ago

Pat

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on March 17, 2005

Beautiful tribute Karla

Blessings

Paul;-]

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 17, 2005

May she always live on in your heart and soul, Karla.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

Your haiku honors your mother's memory, beautiful Karla

Hugs, Carole

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

Condolances and thanks for both your reviews on my poem regards my dad...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

Powerful write
May God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

Nothing is as powerful as a photo that speaks as poignantly as your motherly haiku. She has never left; your poem is evidence of her spirit within you.

blessin's and ((((hugs)))) my Sistah,
cynth'ya

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

Sweet and loving tribute from a cherished daughter to a cherished mom. Beautifully expressed, Karla. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

lovely tribute, I too know what it is to lose Mom

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

Your simple words reach in and grab my heart twisting it from my chest. My own mother died two years ago this month. It was like a book closed.

Hugs,
Mari

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

My mother passed away four years ago on March 15, 2001 at the age of 90 but not a day goes by that I do not think of her. This is a beautiful senyu Karla.

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

It may be 15 years, but if your like me, you remember it like it was yesterday... beautiful tribute...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

Thank you for sharing a big part of your heart with us. Sorry for the loss.

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

How sad Karla...My mother, even though she was mean to me during her lifetime, I cannot hate her, passed away February, 1997 of lung cancer. I wouldn't have wished that on anyone. I think the reason my mother was mean to me was because she didn't trust males. I'm not sure. But anyway, I can't hate her, because she was my mother. Thnx for your well wishing for me tonight. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & (((HUGS))), Barbie

"If I have to...Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

wonderful tribute

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

What more needs to be said than this, Karla? Both the visual and your 17 well-chosen syllables express the inexpressible with a depth of feeling that says more than all the most decorative and "full-on" spilling of thoughts ever could do. Love the ideas that Eileen has shared with you and truly believe that there must be a lot of truth in what she says. This attachment will stay with you forever, and I believe and trust that you will be together again one day. She has never let you go! Bless you, love and prayers Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

Oh my Mom was the same age when she died!!

Hugs & Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

Very beautiful Karla! The simplicity makes this tribute all the more stunning! Losing a mother is losing the greatest of all bonds due to the womb in which she embraced us. It is a mystery how much we have learned from those nurturing months connected by a miraculous umbilical chord. The yearn for that womb is great,so we mourn with good reason when we lose our mothers. My thoughts and prayers are with you as you think of her Karla!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

(((Karla)))

Wonderful tribute to our mother; she is still missed even now, fifteen years later! I will never forget her as long as I live; she died too young and too soon! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

Karla, this is beautiful. I am sorry for your loss. God bless.