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Who You Callin Crazy?
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Random thoughts on the shoddy conditions and treatment our returning men and women in uniform receive (and have, for a very long time). I know...


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... wounded in body and mind,
watching buildings around them,
watching overworked staff burn
out, dissolve into chaos:
did anybody complain?
how many were told to shut
UP, mind their own business?
how many were called ... crazy?
WHAT HAPPENED TO THE REPORTS?
veterans hospitals are
full of frustration and men
and women who know, first hand,
just waiting to tell the tale.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman.  (3/6)

 

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 Reviews of "Who You Callin Crazy?"
Reviewed by Henry Stevens
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
THis is one of the ways we go wrong. Where the promise is not kept. Where info about the promise not kept is hushed. But look, you are dealing with a dishonest system, top to bottom. Some of it will get corrected, most won't. I hope they get proper care for Veterans, PDQ. Keep writing, keep speaking out. s/henry

Reviewed on March 16, 2007

"Who You Callin Crazy"
Karla this is a powerful and truthful poem.
It is gut wrenching to know and see, we need the prayers of hope for our troops and their care upon returning with their war torn mind, hearts, and bodies.
Thank you for sharing this work,
Sincerely,
From the Heart...

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on March 8, 2007
Some very good points made Karla, and they're true.......M

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 7, 2007
Compelling write Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on March 7, 2007
It is pathetic, Karla; we need to apologize to our veterans, and give them the fair treatment that they rightfully deserve! Such a shame, such a g'd' shame!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 7, 2007
Some returning soldiers received Purple Hearts medals, I can assure you that them aren't good to make soup when you are hungry, the taste is too bitter.
Georg

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on March 7, 2007
Compelling write, so true too. We had one returned, in a box, only it was the wrong bloke, big muck up in transit, so his wife was traumatized twice..
They did get the soldier who died back, totally embarressed the GOV haha.

Hugs
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2007
And we just go, tut tut, and carry on eating lunch...

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on March 7, 2007
the expendable masses
delight the kingdom

thanks,
~D.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 6, 2007
So very, very true. It is and has been a disgrace for decades.
Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on March 6, 2007
Sis Karla I always enjoy our conversations with you and your sister Karen over the phone. When you told me that you'd written and posted this poem when you nor I had no way of knowing what I posted about YTB HOPE for veterans and their families, it all goes to show one that Divine Providence rules supreme, and praise the Lord all we have to do is obey the call to express our thoughts. If God is in our thoughts and the keeper of perfect timing, there's no telling how many thousands of "strangers unaware" will be blessed, because we obeyed the call. . . to write.

Thanks for your prayers, and your friendship,
blessin's
cynth'ya

Reviewed on March 6, 2007
Sayit girlfriend, keep on speaking truth to power. I feel the anger and frustration of those who give so much for all of us only to be short changed by the ones who benefit the most. Keep on tellingitlikeitis. PLB&G for caring and sharing. <Mikii>

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on March 6, 2007
Another example of man's inhumanity to man, isn't it, Karla? Shameful, really. Love and compassion are certainly in short supply these days! Pity!

Peace and love
Lena

Reviewed on March 6, 2007
We need to give our veterans a lot more respect, and alot more care than this, I applaud you for writing this, and for serving the country the way you did.
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 6, 2007
consigned to waste bins and W.A.I.L piles, perhaps.. Worry About It Later piles... MUCH later... TOOO LATE for most... Keep rantin, Darlin. You are a natural bar-rattler! Bless you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 6, 2007
Sad state of affairs and it seems to get worst with each passing day.

Fee

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on March 6, 2007
Thank you, Karla. This needed to be said, and repeated over and over again until someone in power does something about it. Bless you and your loving heart.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
Reviewed on March 6, 2007
All these people deserve the best and America has the best in the world. Good work Karla

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 6, 2007
WHAT HAPPENED TO THE REPORTS?

Well, very sadly, many of us wrote very many reports over the last 30 years about the plight of our valiant veterans, and most of them have been routinely ignored by 'the higher ups.'

So now I write reports about the plight of animals and our environment, and most of them are being ignored, too.

But we must continue - to fight!

Reviewed on March 6, 2007
Veterans deserve better treatment. Well done Karla


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