...your {dark} whhiiissssppppper lifts the hair on the back of the neck: chilled fingers slap their way all the way down to the bone. i feel your tongue strum the frets of my spine, >>twanging<< each nerve until they huuuummmmmmmm your song of pain: love is.n't supposed to hurt like this ...
(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (8/30)
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A different write for you my friend, but you've expressed it well...you are right, love isn't supposed to hurt...love should be gentle and filled with compassion for our mate...a powerful write!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Violence in any relationship is the output of sick minds that cause hurt in the name of love. It is so easy to confuse "sick" love with "caring" love when fulfillment of needs are strongly sought and any attention at all gained from the abuser is disguised as love.
Stopping the abuse has to begin at home where the abuser is taught to abuse.
Any man or woman who verbally/physically abuses their loved ones, their partners, their mates is lower than a snake's belly. Chillingly effective poetry that wraps its fingers around the heart and gives it a painful squeeze. You may have saved lives today with this hardhitting piece today. Thank you! Very well done, Karla; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <
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Love Tinka
GREAT write Karla!
It needs to sTOP!
Warmly, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Georg
God Bless
Michelle~
Aberjhani
Walt
Fee
Annie Lacy
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Larry
Violence in any relationship is the output of sick minds that cause hurt in the name of love. It is so easy to confuse "sick" love with "caring" love when fulfillment of needs are strongly sought and any attention at all gained from the abuser is disguised as love.
Stopping the abuse has to begin at home where the abuser is taught to abuse.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <
And that pic--W O W!!!!