Daddy's Eyes (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2008

very very touching....reminds me of my papa,he too has blue eyes....so well written...I'm glad my sky is always BLUE.,,WoW.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

Beautiufl write...a wonderful comparison! I'm glad that the sky is blue as well my friend! You're a beautiful poet my friend...write on!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Selene Skye

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

This is beautiful!!!! I can relate completely. With father's day coming up, it's always difficult to those of us who no longer have our fathers, only their memories.
Hugs
Selene

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

I'm glad it's BLUE too Karla!
this is so sweet, and I bet your daddy is smiling down at you!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSSion Lady Shexooo

STay Positive!
Write On! SORRY! it's been awhile, but I'm tryin' real hard to play catch up, I miss the inspiration I get from you and so many others deep thinkers/writers~!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

A heartfelt poem and a beautiful picture, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

A fine tribute and one that I am sure your Dad would have appreciated and understood all too well.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

A beautiful blue sky. Always beyond the clouds, the hue is blue. God bless. JMW

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

Karla,
I love how you use nature to demonstrate your father's qualities. Beautiful, yet sad poem~
Sheila

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

This is good...always remember this and keep it in your heart.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Sweet, reverent memories to fill your aching heart, God bless...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

sad, and also so sweet

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Sad, but what beautiful memories the blue sky will bring you!
{{{HUGS}}} Micke

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Blue eyes, the last thing I saw as watching my husband die. His were true blue too and very noticeable. I have gray green ones and not very pretty a color. The sky is so blue always except when it storms, and you Daddy is in your heart and will be forever. People will mention things and he will be brought right back to you. Oh, the memories we can still have to keep us going. Good and very good write. My favorite yet of yours about Daddy.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

There's always a blue sky behind all the clouds. Well said Karla.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Yes I am glad to Dear Karla because I can assure you that your Daddy is happy,.Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Sad and beautiful,and I can relate! He'd be proud of you!

ET

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

I'm glad your sky it blue, too, Karla, and you're finding peaceful thoughts about your dad. Blessings.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Karla he will be with you always, I know from experience grieving is a process that we need to live through...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

He is with you always, Karla.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

may all your coming days be the color of your daddy's eyes. Breathe Karla, it does get easier...promise!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

...beautiful write...sees all you color in the skies Karla...
John

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

You won't soon forget those eyes, as he'll be with you always...ed

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Blue... my favorite color... and the color of my Mama's eyes and Ahna'a and mine...

Crystal :~)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

I am sure that looking into your eyes it will be like looking into your father's.

Georg

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

--like the ogress's daddy... I'm glad your sky is blue too. --Charlie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Daddy is with us, always, and he will watch out over us from Heaven. So glad we had the daddy we did; so many other kids aren't nearly as blessed as we were; we were blessed to have our daddy for 77 years! Beautiful write; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

How marvelous!!! This is so beautiful...

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

He is truly with you in all you feel, see or think. You have so much to be grateful for Karla for that love will never die. Love, Bonnie