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Can't Go On Like This
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Poetry:  sometimes the words come
easily, but usually have to pull them
out of the Muse, like teeth with deep

roots.  They don't want to leave the
comfort of safety in numbers.  Scary
being out there, by yourself --- being

stared at.  Having eyes judge you,
telling how good or bad you are.  It's
enough to make a Poet sick --- they

begin to question their ability as a
writer, wonder if they are going MAD
because the poems they've penned

no longer appeals to the masses in
her mind (how she thinks, anyway).
If she complains, she's told to stop

--- so I'm stopping.  That's where I'm
at.  Can't go on like this.  Taking a
break to save what's left of my sanity.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (6/28)


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 Reviews of "Can't Go On Like This"
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
Good Morning Karla,
As Your Heart Speaks, Your Soul Sings The Poetic Muse Of Your Words Belonging To You & There Is No Right/Wrong In any of self expressions. You Share Lovely Poetry From Your Beautiful Heart & any break you need may you never truely rest your pen from embracing the pages of your passion.
Much Love & Inspiration Poetess
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on June 29, 2008
Sane poets,now there's a thought! Write what your heart and soul tell you. If it is liked by others fine. If it is not, too bad. I used to worry a little about acceptance of my work by others. My writing peers in particular. But for a long time now I have adopted an attitude of; I'll give it from my heart and soul, keep it down to earth, attempt to write poems that make a difference. And if I fail,too bad. I am not going to let that detract from my enjoyment of plying the art as best I can. But why would you worry about your work anyway? I look at the number of poems you have penned and just the number of reviews. Both are staggering! And that does not include who knows how many read and didn't have the time to leave a review. If your worried, I need to trash my pens and paper and take up another form of relaxation. God bless. JMW

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 29, 2008
We all need breaks, from time to time; they truly soothe the soul.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on June 29, 2008
Is this called writer's block? Then if it is, I join you. I just can't seem to sit at my computer long enough to write anything except these reviews. Then the outdoors call to me and I hurry out into the beautiful morning freshness, enjoy the still cool air and my rose bushes. Sometimes we all need a change of pace.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 29, 2008
Karla, you are going through something that I think we have all gone through from time to time...and I guess will continue to go through. Hang in there!

Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Karla:

We all go through this emotion at one time or another. Many days I just call it quit on everything that I have been doing. Then I just sat around all day doing nothing. We're like balloons, keep on blowing and blowing until we reach the breaking point, and then...let the air out...and begin all over again.

In the meantime, sit back, and relax, then come back later.

Hugs,
Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Karla I'm not sure you can be a poet and be sane,so please don't be away too long or you might just lose your muse;-) great poem! ET

Reviewed on June 28, 2008
once bitten you're smitten Karla, verse is a release, the same way you released this, hugs

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
We've probably all been there at one time or another Karla. Take a break if you must, It helped me in the past; you just need to let it come naturally. Good luck my friend and God bless.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Yes, I've been here before. Take a rest but please come back soon. No one puts the words together like you do. Liz

Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Such refreshing honesty of the trials and tribulations of poets and their lifes, I think I'll join you for a while Karla, you might be starting a trend, we better let Matt know hm, or maybe hedge our bets till the next Storm, and Drang, needs expression right....
Hugs and Happiness! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
I can understand where you are coming from and I do have some advice be it ever so humble, take your break but while you are taking it look outside the box as they say...your talent for writing on weather etc is unquestionable but now maybe it is time to seek out and look for other topics and types of writing. Just an idea but I think you need to find a new challenge.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Hang in there my friend...please for the den would not be the same without you. I so enjoy reading your wonderful work and looking at your beautiful photos. It is true that a poet does feel deeper than most, see things with more passion...we tend to see a story in everything...this describes you my friend. Take a short break if you need a little time, but please don't linger away from the den as a poet such as yourself needs to be heard, I have found when other things in life press me down creating less time for me at the den I am not as fulfilled as I am when I am able to visit the den on a regular basis to write and read others who share many of the passions that I do...words are powerful and a poet/authors words should be heard. Write on my friend....
Blessings from your friend in Ky.
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Karla you are so unique, a breath of fresh air,, even as I read this you make me smile... I am a big fan of yours,,, So take that coffee break,, and I would like mine black please. :)
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Hang in there, Karla. As the man said, to your own self, etc.
You've made a fan of this guy, who will miss you if you stay
away too long. -gene.

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Don't give up Karla -- the den would surely be at loss without your storm blowing our ways. Your gifts are indeed part of this den puzzle that can't be replaced. Deborah

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Kimmy is so very true, please don't go....can i beg you? okay well, how about just a few days vacation, I love to read from you but I know you have to rest,but never left the stupid opinions of anyone stop you or break you for whatever reason, you are perfectly normal and beautiful too. Love the double effect of that pic!

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Oh! ...but we do go on Karla, some days we feel this way, some days another, many times we feel the fire burning within and other times, cold as ice, ready to throw in the towel...AND sometimes, ready to pick up the pieces...it's all in a matter of choice. No, we can't choose to be successful, we either are or we are not. But, with success and failure come the good and the bad. Wrigt on (build on what you thirst for) Write on, because you can...and you have the gift to do so...AND Right on, with this poem, girl...:)

Sorry I have been in and out and mostly, out...my life needed breathing room and contemplative sessions to keep me sane...
Do what you must and make it quick!
I'll try if you try! :)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Karla,

This is so true. You've expressed a poet, or a not yet poet (me) so beautifully. Wonderful.

Mary

Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Karla~

I wish I knew what to do to help you, but I don't. It's something that only you have to work out. All I CAN do is pray, be there for you, support you and your words. Being a good poet does NOT depend on how many reviews (or trackers) you get. You write for YOU, don't worry what others think. I do wish you'd get more reviews; you deserve them!! You are an awesome poet, and to give up your words would be the worst thing you can do.

Don't give up. I need to read your words; so do many others. We believe in you, even if you feel otherwise.

I love you!

(((HUGS))) and prayers~

As always, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Powerfully expressed emotion here; very well done! Honest, open. You've poured your heart out in this one!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Must be because you are that whole year older...but better to take a vaca than to feel badly...Find Peace dear friend, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Karla,
I often feel the same way..and think well maybe i ndid write my last one this time...then i give it a rest...and my han dpicks up the pen again...take a rest I'll be looking for you ..in the near futute......
Stan


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