Watermelon Skies (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2008

Nice imagery Karla! Well done!

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Karla,
I love how you reach to the sky for inspiration! Clever poem. Hugs!
Sheila

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

This is a tasty, succulent, seed spitting metaphor. Great photo too. God bless. JMW

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on July 13, 2008

A ripe metaphor! Color is everything to a poet, Karla...the things we use to associate like things are abundant in nature if we pay attention...Excellent word usage.

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on July 13, 2008

Oh my god, this is so good! Perfection. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 13, 2008

Simply Lovely, the words and the photo!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on July 13, 2008

Great picture, beautiful poem!....M

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 12, 2008

Some of your writes such as this one Karla is simply delicious. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on July 12, 2008

Deliciously sweet and satisfying!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 12, 2008

Love the analogy, Karla. Nicely done! Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on July 12, 2008

Great write Karla; picture too.

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on July 12, 2008

- - - proving, again, that our world offers beauty that renews itself over and over... just for us! This is good work... making my morning better. Thank you. - Bill

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

All that cool refreshing rain feeding all in dire need, so lovely....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

This was beautiful Karla, keep these coming
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

I had never thought of a juicy watermelon at dawn...
Unless I'm hungry! :-D

Axilea

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

Delightful!
John

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

A divine write my friend, beautiful and juicy description, enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

Beautifully penned, Karla and the pic is absolutely glorious ... hugs

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

What a wonderful description. A lovely poem.

Reviewed by Quanda Graves

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

Karla???? Alll I can say is WOW!! What a refreshing, lite and amazing way to look at the sky. Love it!!!!!

Until...

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

....Refreshing poem,, what a delight Karla!! Love the photo too.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

...wonderful images...become the imaginative wonder of your pen and photography...in this write.
very well done Karla...
John

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

I love reading your poem.The picture is absolutely breath-taking.Don't you just love a beautiful sunset?:-).I really like the title of your poem and the words in it.Very unique.take care of yourself

Edwin

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

What a beautiful image you've created here, Karla! I love the title.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

Watermelon skies are alright as it don't spit that seeds down on me.

Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

Excellant write and love the symbology...well done.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

You and your poems are a wonder to behold, love Holly

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

Ah...but I SURE hope that watermelon is seedless!!!
hee, hee...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

Yummy! A most delicious write, Karla; I'm now droolin' over here! LOL Very well penned/illustrated; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twinks, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

Karla, that's what I like: an early morning poem that is
both beautiful and good for you. Thank you. -gene.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

Yummy!!! This is delicious and simply wonderful. your photos are captivating.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

Ah, yes indeed . . . Now if we just had a taste of watermelon wine to go along with this . . . I think Tom T. is bring us some later . . .

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

I don't think I've heard that term, "Watermelon Skies," before. Your poem and your picture have captured it for me. What a wonderful way to start the day! Eileen

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

Karla, your poem is absolutely beautiful - loved it!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

a beautiful offering

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

A delicious poem, and what a pic!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

Just watch those seeds, they can cause all sorts of problems...ed