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Strangers in a Strange Land
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Georg Mateos' BROKEN PROMISES inspired these lines. When's enough going to be enough?

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i was at the food pantry the other
day and couldn't help but notice a
young man, one with old eyes.  his
head was downcast in shame; you
could see he didn't want to ask for

help:  he should have been able to
provide for his family.  ever since
he got back from iraq, he's looked
for work, but no one's hiring, not
with the economy the way it is.

the bills are past due; last week,
they got an eviction notice - and
there wasn't a damn thing i could
do but give him my shoulder to cry
on.  we, who answered the call to

serve, who fought on foreign soil
or filled a need here at home should
not feel like strangers in a strange
land, wondering where our next meal
is coming from or where we'll sleep ...



(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (7/25)


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 Reviews of "Strangers in a Strange Land"
Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on July 30, 2009
Powerful, true and sad. Greed, folly, criminality and short-sightedness have taken their toll on our country.

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2009
Most upsetting Karla.(Hugs)Holly

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 29, 2009
a nation's rewards for a hero returned from defending his home land -- 148,000 H 1B visas (work visas) a month are issued to foreign workers by the United States president and Congress -- while Americans go without work -- 8 million illegal immigrants have full time jobs in America -- 47 million Americans are unemployed -- what is wrong with this picture my friends -- sorry for emoting, but the situation has me gravely concerned for our great nation -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on July 29, 2009
Touching, well told.

Reviewed on July 29, 2009
Amazingly Powerful! Karla I adivice you to publish this poe in all US papers to wake up people in power and to lend a shoulder to millions around the nation who are in the same status with that man.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on July 28, 2009
Wow! Great write Karla. It's awful that this is actually true. Those men and women stood up for us and this is the thanks they get. Tooo sad!

Anna

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on July 28, 2009
How true this is, Karla, so glad you wrote about this subject to draw light upon it for others in the same situation-- excellent, my friend.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
Karla,
This touches the heart. They sit in an office and make too much a year while our heros can't make ends meet. I don't know how this continues. Thanks for sharing this poem. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
Karla, I feel so sad for those like yourself who have to go through this kind of treatment! It is unjust and a dark stain on our leaders
who know how to make promises to get elected, then forget them afterwards. No one ever seems to find answers to these proble,s. perhaps a revolution is the only way!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on July 27, 2009
It's a disgusting shame our government can send billions to other countries but won't take care of our vets. Keep penning it Karla, it needs to be said and who better to say it than one who has lived it?

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
Karla, this breaks the heart. So well written.

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on July 26, 2009
It is such a sad state when we cannot, or rather the government, cannot provide the neccessary help to our troops when they return home.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 26, 2009
i am sorry for what you all must endure--be proud, though, of the choice you made and know that many are appreciative

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on July 26, 2009
He sure shouldn't have to go through that after what he's been through... We need to help our Vets get replaced in civilian life. They should have first picks of jobs and services... You said it with touching emotion...
Later, michael

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on July 26, 2009
This definitely breaks the heart, Karla ... very well expressed and makes me both sad and angry. Many hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 26, 2009
deeply unsettling ...

you have a good heart ...

Reviewed on July 26, 2009
It is such a shame that these young people are going through such hardship. Well done, Karla!

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on July 26, 2009
A well written piece that expresses the sad realities,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on July 25, 2009
Strikes directly to the heart. Very well done. Rebecca

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 25, 2009
A heart breaker.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 25, 2009
I hear you and know this one only too well...
fee

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 25, 2009
Well done, Karla. -gene

Reviewed on July 25, 2009
And it's happening to their families while the serviceman/woman is in Iraq and Afghanistan. A shame upon us...what was started 8 years ago is not easily overcome in six months...
Excellent write, Karla! Pray for our country, and Jersey Ed...
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on July 25, 2009
It is so grossly unfair. Patrick

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on July 25, 2009
I am so sorry that stories like this are happening.Thank you Karen for bringing it to our attention.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed on July 25, 2009
Its sad the way we treat the heroes of our country, truly sad, and my heart breals for them
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 25, 2009
Sad indeed ! And what is Obama doing about this mess? Absolutely nothing; except renting a $20,000,000 (million) estate on Martha's Vineyard for his summer vacation. He's no better than the CEOs who took million dollar bonuses from the government bailout.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 25, 2009
A sad statement about how humans have not learned anything over such a long time. Thank you, Karla. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on July 25, 2009
Powerful write, Karla; this should not be!! All leaders are responsible for taking care of those whom they ask to serve or volunteer to serve. All of them are guilty of broken promises made. Such a shame! All of our veterans from all wars or conflicts should not lack for ANYTHING!!!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sis, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on July 25, 2009
Such a sad but true write my friend, it seems that things are getting harder and harder for everyone! I worry about my son and husband's jobs as they are both coal related. I know that there are consequences with coal, but in Kentucky if we didn't have coal especially in the southeastern part of the state...there wouldn't be much life. It's a scary time with the economy as it is. The future looks grim for many. I hate that our service men and women lay their life on the line and separate themselves from their family to help protect our soil and the lives of many....only to come home to situations like you've written about. It's a shame that there's not something in place for those whom have served. Too many in our area that haven't worked a day in their life, healthy, but sorry that draw money from the government...to me this is taking from those that really deserve it. Those with disabilities, the elderly, and those whom have served. Your writing always inspires me and gets me fired up. Write on dear friend, you've got a wonderful heart and compassion for others.
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on July 25, 2009
Well said Karla. If you would ever be brave enough to look into the eyes of Bush, you'd find a dead zone. Lives are nothing to him but objects to be used to make him and his cronies richer. How can mere objects be hungry or in need of housing? To the likes of him, you are old news and of no more use than to be lining bird cages. Strong words here I know but I just HATE what he has done to your Country. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 25, 2009
Nobody on the Nation of the Free should be a slave of necessity and less of them that fought so necessity wouldn't be a our shores.
Compassionate words you have written, but under them are the anger of every woman and man that done Service in the Armed Forces.

Georg

PS. Now they say about sending 22.000 more soldier, they would be cheaper if they die over there.


Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2009
Very say indeed sweet lady..wonderful writing as always..sure have missed you...stay safe and well...Hugss

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on July 25, 2009
Karla, this one gives me chills and tears. No, it shouldn't happen. An excellent write!

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 25, 2009
Karla, it is a sad story that exists in every corner of America. Our representatives in Washington seem to be living 'above the reality line'...and I"m afraid they don't want to look down to see the mess that has been made.

Cheers and peace,
Dan


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