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Silence
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Where were you ....


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Erased
from memory,
the sacrifice of those
who serve(d).

Only
when convenient
do you wave the red, white
and blue,

wearing
your loyalty
like it was a ... flag or
something,

saying
you supported
them all along.  Really!
Where were

you when
a soldier came
home, injured in body
and mind?

When a
Veteran wound
up homeless and going
hungry?

... . ...

What?  Did
you say something?
Don't hear nothing except

... . ....


silence .. . . ..

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (11/4)


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 Reviews of "Silence"
Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on November 6, 2009
I hear your anger over this all too often situation. Well penned. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 5, 2009
Too true and so very sad.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 5, 2009
Far too true; far too often; for far too many people.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 5, 2009
Haunting!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
Powerful reminder, Karla.

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
Haunting words written here, Karla. Accusatory words written here and, unfortunately, all too true.
Mark

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
Very true and our troops today are being slaughtered for the sacrifice driven by politics. Such a sad state of affairs. I fly my flag everyday, and have yellow ribbons in the front window. Take the flag down when a new one needs to be put up and change the ribbons every six months. Now our nephew will be on his way to Afghanastan. Will he come home in a body bag too??

Be always safe,
Karen

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
an unfortunate state of the human condition ... it easy to forget what is uncomfortable ... but without those who have sacrificed mind & body, the complacent would have lost their freedoms a long time ago ,,,

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
i know you feel forgotten but rest assured, you and those who serve are not forgotten here

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
I never forget. Rebecca

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
Dearest Karla,

I see, speak and support you, our soldiers now serving and our much cherished Vets. Where would we be, what would we be and imagiine our lossesiif it weren't for these people who've turned their lives upside down to fight,sacrificed themselves and family life, at times... and still lack the respect of this great nation.
I say outstanding job to all. Thank you isn't even near a word that belongs.
Love and respect from this Georgia girl.
Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
Great write Karla and I know that feeling all too well.
hugs
fee

Reviewed on November 4, 2009
A reminder for us all, thank you for sharing, I enjoyed reading this, a great deal, keep it up and be blessed
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
And then were the ones, those that went for weeks behind enemy lines to rescue prisoners, to take a dead soldier back which we never left behind, and the ultimate stuff of nightmares when we become tunnel rats, got promotion in the field and ribbons, got back to the US of A to be spit upon. In shame we changed our names legally, trying to forget our past and the ingratitude, but we never forgot or buddies, that it seems we were the only ones that didn't that.

Semper Fi
"georg"


Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
This past September 11th I didn't hear a word from the huge company where I work. It just meant the word had to start with me.
I put up in our office the huge flag that draped my Uncle's casket- decades before I was born.
Silence is a difficult thing. It can mean we are speechless.
Sometimes I read a poem here and I would kiss the feet of that poet- but I don't have the words- or the phone rings and I'm off on a mission.
I try not to take silence personally when I'm looking for a response.
You are very dear to be the reminder often needed.

John

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
too painful < <tears>>...ed

Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
My father served our country in the 101st Airborne Division in WWII. Tears came to his eyes everytime someone acknowledged his sacrifices he made for our freedom. My brother, 19 years old gave his life in Vietnam and his body was never recovered. I salute and honor every Man and Woman who serves in the military for our feedom. Very well done Karla!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
The warrior has been a throw-away band of hero's since time immortal, except maybe during the heyday of Rome when they had the praise of the Caesars.

Reviewed on November 4, 2009
Karla~

Shame on us for forgetting those who gave their all (and even their lives) so we could be free!! We should spend some time in their shoes, let us see/feel the heat of battle, come home with limbs missing or our minds shot, or in intractable pain with no relief. Maybe then we could learn to show some compassion to those who answered the call to serve. You are the voice of experience: the voice of the Veteran, the voice who gives a damn. Well done, Karla, and thank YOU for YOUR service!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( *tears!*

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
The very sad truth. People are basically shits and unless something directly affects their own little corner of the world, it is ignored. It's easy for them to forget the price paid every day for our freedoms by our current troops. The vets? Well, isn't that something you take your dog to? Criminal. Patrick

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
Sad reality and shameful fact. The Establishment has been very careful to keep our military an "all volunteer" force. Out of sight, out of mind. Like Oceania in 1984. Perpetual war but surreal at the same time. If there were a draft, more people would be outraged I'm sure. Powerful words Karla. Remember, it was George Bush Sr. who once referred to our men in uniform as "fodder units." Kissinger called them "dumb animals." Shows you what the politicians think.


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