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Thank You, Daddy
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... colors just seem to pop in
Autumn.  The humidity has
been scraped out of the air,

so nothing gets in the way ---
they just explode with hues
so bright it shocks the eyes

with pleasure.  Take this
sunflower --- golden against
cobalt skies.  It nearly drove

me to my knees to envision
such beauty.  Such a simple
thing but one I needed ---

especially today.  Daddy
would have been 80 years
old.  Instead of me giving him

a present, he gave me one
wrapped with the brightest
wrappings he could find.

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (10/2)


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 Reviews of "Thank You, Daddy"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on October 5, 2010
You've expressed how much you miss him beautifully, Karla. Nice symbol for that love. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
Excellent piece.

Reviewed by David Maclellan
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
He will live forever in your thoughts as long as you can relate the beauty of nature to your memories like you have in this poem. Beautifully done Karla,
Best regards
David

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
Very touching sweet lady...Hugss

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
so very lovely-touching

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
What a lovely way to honor you dad's memory with this bright happy poem Karla...well done
peace, Carole~

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 2, 2010
Oh so right, Karla, so right.
How you turn pain to beauty in these fine fine lines.

John

Reviewed on October 2, 2010
This is beautiful Karla, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on October 2, 2010
This is a beautiful tribute to your Dad. Well done! Rebecca

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 2, 2010
Lovely poem, Karla. Happy 80th to your Daddy. -gene.

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring
Reviewed on October 2, 2010
A stormspinning poem. Brilliant as expected' from you.

Reviewed on October 2, 2010
O, Karla, I have a lump in my throat that's the size of Alaska since reading this, and my eyes fill with tears! What a stunning poem and picture; simply magnificent! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 2, 2010
Karla, such beautiful thoughts here...and I'm thinking that your father has received a beautiful gift from such a special daughter. Your photo completes this!


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