Again... that last line brings it all together and makes your poem perfect.
Cryssa
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2008
.. .. . words are naught but sounds, longing, to be soemthing bigger than theya re. ..
and yet what miracles they can work.. .
there is always some.thing to be, said, heard, found in a real word. a real sound.
as if the turning of our axis' plays music. ..
these days, i find myself covering my ears; trying to drown out the. .. .wor.l.ds. ...
...but then stars have a way of aligning themselves.
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Profoundly said and deeply felt Ted! Visual is stunning!
Write On!
From our home to yours - HAPPY EASTER! and a Happy "NEW" Spring!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Shexooo
It unites spiritual wisdom from the East and West to help readers experience Christ consciousness in the here and now. Combining the Oneness teachings of India with a fresh look at the New Testament.
This second revised edition describes, from Onlinesss Self Awakening perspective, the major Truth-consciousness realm-waves of transcendent Self Awakening
Cryssa
and yet what miracles they can work.. .
there is always some.thing to be, said, heard, found in a real word. a real sound.
as if the turning of our axis' plays music. ..
these days, i find myself covering my ears; trying to drown out the. .. .wor.l.ds. ...
...but then stars have a way of aligning themselves.
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Write On!
From our home to yours - HAPPY EASTER! and a Happy "NEW" Spring!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Shexooo
STay Positive!
STay Strong!
Thanks for sharing your vision!!
Love Tinka