Mother Can You Hear Me? (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on September 18, 2007

excellent-and the picture is beautiful

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

Acknowledging our crime. Repentence means if each of us does our small part GREAT results will follow, and Mother Earth will survive and prosper.

This needs to be brought to a wider audience, somehow. It is the responsibility of each of us to preserve our earth.

Blessings to you and this is an exceptional write.

Kathy

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

This earth is out of course, and Gods eventualy going to right it. Meanwhile the shepherds need to tend to the flock. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

Gorgeous picture! We all must begin to take care of God's world before it is too late. Fantastic write as always from your heart....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

Amber you said it all, now if people would just heed your words, we may have a chance. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

I hear the calls of nature's need
I feel the pain, brought by acid rains
staining the souls of men so cruel
killing creature big and small.
Peace be with you

Love
William

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

Come on, let's start to realize our crime, and save our planet from dying!

Far too many still turn a very deaf ear to Mother. And I hope they can finally hear your shout, before it's too late.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

She heard you but can't stop sobbing to answer.
Great poem.
Georg

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

This is in my opinion one of your most beautiful poems Amber. Filled with wisdom and concern.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

Love the poem, the picture and the whole gosh darn thing! blessings, holly

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

Amber,

What a stunning image and beautiful, poignant poetry: she may not hear us, if we keep treating her the way we are. God help us when she's had ENOUGH. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

Well said Amber and heartfelt.

Fee

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

Amber, I'm glad you wrote this important reminder...lets hope people listen.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

Aptly written words Amber.
It is amazing how we continue to put profit above resources and our planet. Thank you for your love of nature and earth's spirit.
My very best
Chris