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Soul's Release
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Soul's release comes from sadness today. I found out a friend has betrayed our friendship with lies and misconceptions. It really hurts my soul but my soul has released this pain and this poem has come about.


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"Soul's Release"
by Amber "V" Moonstone 9/30/07

Sometimes the truth is not what you want to hear;
You think you know someone,
and then the next moment they do something that hurts you so badly.

Sometimes the truth is what you need to hear;
You think that person would not be capable of such harm,
and then the next moment you learn of their betrayal.

Sometimes the truth is hard to believe;
You think that person would never betray you in that way,
and then the next moment you are hit in the face with the truth.

Sometimes the truth is bittersweet,
You knew that person was betraying you,
and the next moment your soul lets you hear the truth.

Sometimes the truth is all there is,
and you now see that person for who they really are
and the next moment your soul sets you free from their betrayal.

Author's Notes: I trusted a friend to be honest and caring, to only find out everything was not true . MP this is dedicated to your truth.

Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V" Moonstone
 

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Reviewed on October 2, 2007
BETTER Now than Later My SWEET Loving Spiritual FRIEND! but, My heart hurts for your hearts LOSS! Time will heal what needed to be done, for some reason YOU Both may not understand for some time! May Healing come on Wings of a dove! Love and Hugs, Warrior Goddess Purple Sheeeoox

STay Positive! HAPPY and STrong
and Oh, your poem is intense, and heartfelt felt the to the very core, it came from my friend!
Sleep WEll, and let be - Let it beeeeeeee!
This too Shall Pass"
I CARE that you were HURT!
Damn, giving in to your heart and Soul with someone, is ALWAYS a risk that we take, and TRUST is the Hardest and most Vulnerable thing we HAVE! Many Warm Hugs to YOU Sweetie~ INNER PEAcE!

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2007
I think we all have been there Amber-I offer my sympathy to you as I know how painful this can be-Bless you this day

Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2007
Your words are laced with saddness. Your verse honest to the realization of hurt, the understanding of that hurt, and then, the release of that hurt. Your spiritual strength will always overcome your physical pain. The positive energy from the "3" will prevail and bring you to a new destiny.
My very best
Chris

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on October 1, 2007
You've expressed a universal occurence. This happens all the time. We are born trusting those we love and care for, and then we step from our perfect little world of family and start meeting others. We give our new acquaintance our trust, and then they abuse it. The worst ones are those who lead you into tight-woven friendships with sweet double-talk, and then betray you.

Your poem certainly touched a nerve of understanding of what you're saying. Isn't it sad that people have to be like that?

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 1, 2007
They say "no one hurts you more then
A relative of a friend"
I've come to believe this statement
is true.
Sorry my dear friend it happened to you
Peace & Love be with you

William

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 1, 2007


It is not always easy to see through someone Amber, and when the true colours show through it hurts deeply, sorry you had to endure this pain.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 1, 2007
I remember such a pain - it's called my ex-husband.

It is my desire for you that you take the positives from this encounter and move into a better place and heal without remorse.

Kathy

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 1, 2007
Sometimes the truth is hard to believe;

I think that's sadly very often the case.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 1, 2007
Amber,

Trust can only be earned and should never be given freely. Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 1, 2007
No greater or painful dagger that the one drove in your back by a trusted friend.
Some get over it, some can't shake it off.
You did.
Georg

Reviewed on September 30, 2007

Wise are the ones that can check emotions and leave in their hearts the sublime ones ~ as depicted through the lines of "Soul's Release".

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Consider this fine write as a coming of age in your life. Well done.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Excellent writing sweet lady,please stay well and safe...Hugsssss

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Betrayal is always heart wrenching especially if it's a well liked person you trusted completely, yet it is a gift to know you have the spirit of forgiveness to be able to let your soul be free of their deception. Excellent write!

Eileen

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
In the internet world we really know no-one, but in relationships where we see and interact daily and one betrays us it's brutal...but you have done the right thing by releasing your hurt this way, for in doing so 'you heal'. Blessings Amber, love holly

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
i am sorry for how much that hurt you-well written sentiments

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Sadly it happens to all of us. I don't understand why people
betray the way they do.
Those kind of people who stab so deep are surely not poets, or do
have rusty iron hearts.
Thanks for sharing...

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
What is the phrase...."The truth shall set you free." This is a hard pill to swallow but then again it's a wake up call as well.
Love,
Susna

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Oh Amber! I am so sorry! I hate this happened to you! It happened to me and hurt me so very badly. Once a person breaks a trust, it makes it hard to ever trust again. I will add you to my prayers!!

My heart is with you in your hour of pain.
Love,
annie

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Please try to accept it as wisdom & growth to aid you - Not hurt you---Love * Ted


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