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The Veil Of Evening
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Beating hearts surely can be broken...


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The Veil Of Evening
By Amber "V" Moonstone 10/31/07

Underneath the veil of evening
dwells a man child
He stalks around on all fours
looking for bits and pieces
of your beating heart.

He destroys everything,
He is oblivious to feeling anything,
but cannot rest until he breaks
all those tiny pieces
from your beating heart.

He plays like there is no tomorrow
He says words like he is sorry,
He preys like a stalking beast;
but still wants to own those pieces
from your breaking heart.

Underneath the veil of evening
dwells a man beast
He struts around on two legs
using his hands to finally
throw away the pieces of your broken heart.

He howls at the full moon,
He knows that time has come,
When he will have your heart
This Werewolf, knows just when
to strike and break your heart.

author's notes:
A tale of greed and beast on Halloween,
BOO
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V" Moonstone

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 Reviews of "The Veil Of Evening"
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
Does not sound as if this is truly a man for his deeds are inhumane and evil. Great write.

Reviewed on November 4, 2007
Kewl pict! Love that gnarly look! and this POEM!
YOu have a way with story writing my dear!!!
Much love and Warm hugs, Warrior Gypsy Lady Sheeeoox

STay POsitive!


Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 1, 2007
Who gave me away? But I'm cured,
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on November 1, 2007
Zee Verevolf strikes again lol
Nice Amber!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 1, 2007
You writing about Horny Brother PeeWee? because that one above is his picture on Adams (?) clothes.
Apart of it, your poem shows the meticulous excellence of your Muse.
Georg

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
Amber this is

an outstanding write
most enjoyable reading
peace & love

William

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
Wow! no sleep for me tonight.
Love,
annie

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
Very well done as I SIT here this Hallowed Eve contmplating the eeriness of the sights and sounds of thenight.

Fee

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
Just plain nasty teeth and jowls...scarey!

Susan

Reviewed on October 31, 2007
He does indeed sound beastly. So well written Amber.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
"Preys like a stalking beasts" certainly descirbes the picture. Nicely done.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
Yuck! Had you not said that this is a tale of greed and beast on Halloween, I'd have thought that this was reality [minus there werewolf, that is.]

Kathy

Happy Halloween


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