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Saturday...
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...after a Friday night party...


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Saturday morning, a quarter past eight
I'm just waking up and it's already late.

Saturday morning, it's just before ten.
I finally find myself walking through the den.

Saturday lunchtime, it's almost one,
I can't find my rhythm, half the day seems to be gone.

Saturday afternoon, it's way after four,
done nothin' productive, my mood's turning sour.

Saturday evening, it's seven thirty,
I'm still in my PJs, ain't look very flirty.


Saturday night, it's well beyond mid night,
this day went down the drain, and I still complain...



 

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Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2007
Cute write, blessings, holly

Reviewed on September 17, 2007
Now how did I miss THIS? Oh, I know: the Friday night party. LOL Not really: been sober 24 years, thank you very much, but ohhhhhhhh, can I remember feeling like this poor pooch! LOL That pic--this write--spot on! Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Ha! Friday Party Blues singing Saturday away. Been there, done that, and may go back for me. You've pictured it perfectly (love that poor hound, too!). Nice work!

Ted

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Think we all have lost days as you describe, I just try to keep them down to a minimum....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
I think perhaps the picture tells why Saturday was such a disappointment, but oh what fun you had on Friday. [least I hope it was fun] I've had that kind of Saturday, without the Friday night, but give in to leisure and relaxation.

Kathy

Reviewed by R Beeman
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
sounds like a few of my weekends. great observations in real life.

randy


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