Your Fly is Open (poem) by Bernice Angoh on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michael Dainty

Reviewed on May 31, 2008

Dry! I like it remind me never to get on the wrong side of you.

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on May 30, 2008

hee, hee...
You make me laugh.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

Witty Write Bernice! Ever so enjoyable this late night! Cheers, Deborah

Reviewed by Ann Marquette

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

clever and kind of funny...

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

...when one speaks of open feelings...this will come to mind...as you did.
of course this is excellent Bernice...
John

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

You are so cool!;-) Excellent, Bernice!...ET

Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

A good and amusing write.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

When one start to hear that it is time to switch to pants with elastic waistband...and shun the fly (?)

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

I love it...I can just picture the scene.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

If those bags are packed, it must be for a good reason! Nice write.

Reviewed by Shedding Light

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

You have a way of making me laugh.

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

I like this one as always your subtle humour blends with realism to create a great write.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

Too much. I'm laughing. so subtle but so right on the mark. What a great parting shot. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

we bachelors (like me)are often caught with your flies down and there's no one to remind us - Worse, when you notice that while out shopping! So I'll take up (fly) fishing, that'll keep me out of the public eye...(bad pun). Someday I'll buy real estate on Lemonade St.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

Way to go Bernice, thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

Cleverly concocted and expressed, Bernice. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

Very clever Bernice. Sort of a spin off of lipstick on the collar. BRAVO!
Hugs,
Marcia

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

Man I Just Love The Beautiful & Sarcastic Smarter than Him Flip Off Here-lol
it's like keeping balance & flying the bird at the same time to that guy-lol
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

But why is the fly open? :) Hmmm. If it's called 'fly' for men, is it called 'flea' for women? :)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

Oh, my - what a parting shot! LOL Well done, Bernice -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.